How a teenage Anon gets a little too close with sister's pet pony
You’ve changed a lot of this from the original and it’s all for the better. Suzanne’s personality and intelligence is a lot more developed here, there’s a depth that was lacking before. Well done.
next chapter when?
I like this a lot. Hope this didn't get dropped.
It’s almost like she was lacking proper nutrition, mainly the sugar ponies need, to remain intelligent.
You’ve changed a lot of this from the original and it’s all for the better. Suzanne’s personality and intelligence is a lot more developed here, there’s a depth that was lacking before. Well done.
next chapter when?
I like this a lot. Hope this didn't get dropped.
It’s almost like she was lacking proper nutrition, mainly the sugar ponies need, to remain intelligent.