Premise is nice, just wish the long description was more....descriptive.
I'm putting this in my read it later slot. I like the idea of a guy slowly falling for a sisters friend. I hope this pony is really nice to him and sweet.
I read this late last night on my phone. Now that it's morning and I have access to a device with a proper keyboard, I can comment on this. Just repeating what I've learnt so far, so I might as well spoiler this. Seems cute on the surface, but with potentially dark undertones. Artificially created ponies being sold as pets. Yet they have been released before any have truly reached adulthood. The specimen here seems quite intelligent and has the capability of learning and repeating words. Since none of them have lived to their full lifespan, we can reasonably assume that their intelligence may be under-estimated and she may be capable of full speech as she gets older. The ethical implications of keeping such a creature as a pet are […]
They have also been created with with horns and wings. It is unclear whether all of them are pegacorns or whether they have been made in a variety of combinations. This one has wings and a horn, although the horn is very well hidden and may not have been noticed. It's also been stated that this one was different from the others in that she had blue eyes where the rest all had purple. Since none have been in existence long enough to reach their projected maximum lifespan, it is reasonable to assume that not all behaviours have been documented. Those little horns and wings might just have some unexpected functionality as the ponies mature.
11557990 There not parents of the year but there not bad as far as parents go. I'd say at or just below average. My best friend had parents like that but they still care about each other.
Neat story, curious to see were it goes.
I'll keep am eye on ya 👉
Premise is nice, just wish the long description was more....descriptive.
I'm putting this in my read it later slot. I like the idea of a guy slowly falling for a sisters friend. I hope this pony is really nice to him and sweet.
Really nice story
If this stays true to the original, you’d better rate this mature, dude.
I read this late last night on my phone. Now that it's morning and I have access to a device with a proper keyboard, I can comment on this. Just repeating what I've learnt so far, so I might as well spoiler this.
Seems cute on the surface, but with potentially dark undertones. Artificially created ponies being sold as pets. Yet they have been released before any have truly reached adulthood. The specimen here seems quite intelligent and has the capability of learning and repeating words. Since none of them have lived to their full lifespan, we can reasonably assume that their intelligence may be under-estimated and she may be capable of full speech as she gets older. The ethical implications of keeping such a creature as a pet are […]
They have also been created with with horns and wings. It is unclear whether all of them are pegacorns or whether they have been made in a variety of combinations. This one has wings and a horn, although the horn is very well hidden and may not have been noticed. It's also been stated that this one was different from the others in that she had blue eyes where the rest all had purple. Since none have been in existence long enough to reach their projected maximum lifespan, it is reasonable to assume that not all behaviours have been documented. Those little horns and wings might just have some unexpected functionality as the ponies mature.
Pretty good so far. The parents are jerks though
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There not parents of the year but there not bad as far as parents go. I'd say at or just below average. My best friend had parents like that but they still care about each other.
WHY DO I KEEP SEEING REFERENCES!?!?
This fic is wholesome in every bucking good way