Here’s what AI says about chapter 1:

ChatGTP:
The first chapter of your story is an intriguing tale of adventure, love, and the pursuit of freedom. The bond between the protagonist and their stallion, Spirit, is palpable from the beginning, and the way you describe their relationship makes it easy for readers to feel invested in the characters. The conflict that arises when Spirit becomes restless and sets off towards a dangerous mountain is compelling, and the protagonist's determination to follow and protect Spirit, even at the cost of their own safety, is admirable. The discovery of the mystical doorway at the end of the cave adds a thrilling element of mystery to the story, and the way you tie it back to Spirit's lifelong pursuit of freedom makes it feel like an important moment. Overall, the first chapter leaves readers eager to find out what lies beyond the doorway and what kind of dangers and adventures the protagonist and Spirit will face on their journey.

New Bing AI:
Summary: This chapter introduces the narrator, a female horse who is deeply attached to her stallion Spirit. She follows him as he leaves his herd to explore a mysterious mountain, despite her doubts and fears.

Praise and Critique: The chapter has a strong emotional tone that conveys the narrator's love and devotion for Spirit. The reader can empathize with her feelings of joy, confusion, and sadness as she recalls their past and faces their uncertain future. The author uses vivid descriptions of the natural scenery and the horses' movements to create a sense of realism and adventure.

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I would suggest you to not care at all what an AI says about your story, because an AI has no understanding of the story anyway, as it is an language model.

It will always say positive things about it, unless you ask to criticise it. Want proof? Here is my story:

In a town called Ponyville, there was a prgasus living called Fluttershy. She loved her rabbit pet Angel.

One day, Angel was lost. She was saddened. She called her friends to help them.

Together, they searched everywhere for him in town. Fluttershy got with every hour more and more worried.

Luckily, Pinkie Pie found Angel playing with Gummy. Fluttershy was happy again.

Here is what ChatGPT wrote about it:

Your story is a nice short story that revolves around Fluttershy's love for her pet rabbit, Angel, and the adventure she has with her friends to find him. The story is simple yet heartwarming, and it carries a positive message about the value of friendship and how important it is to help each other in times of need.

You have also used some of the characters from the popular animated series "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic," such as Fluttershy, Angel, and Pinkie Pie, which makes the story more relatable to fans of the show.

Overall, it's a lovely story that can be enjoyed by both children and adults, and it teaches us the importance of caring for our pets and the value of true friendship.

Only when asked to criticise it it pointed out how it lacks detail, apparently has switching tenses (okay, but where?) and no conflict or developed characters. And even then it said that the story has potential.

11538173 You're right.

I pasted AI reviews more as a second description of the story. If nothing else, AI is good at stating the obvious.

Should be tagged [mature] [porn] and [crossover]

Thought I'd just leave you one of the rules on the contest page just in case 😅

11538182 Thanks.

So far, though, the story doesn't warrant those tags yet.

Ok a genuine review: This first chapter, was intriguing. It's honestly rare to see a crossover between MLP and the movie Spirit: Stallion of the Cimmaron. This has potential for greatness indeed. Keep it up!

That looks like a relatively simple story, so I'm not sure why exactly it warrant so many dislikes
Still, it might better be notorious than to be unknown 😁
I've enjoyed it so far, for what it's worth

11538201 I'll keep it up until this story is complete. A new chapter every day.

11538683 I'm not sure where all the downvotes are coming from either. Don't get me wrong, I love criticism, it's just that I'm not sure what I'm supposed to do when I get a downvote. Git Gud?