11448635 I was afraid some colors might be hard to read^^ Could you tell me which character's color is too difficult? Also, I can definitely say that as the story goes on, you will have to switch back to night mode. Some of the text colors are very light, they'd almost be invisible on a white screen.
Could you also tell me which sentence is 'run on' please?
11448652 I wanted to clearly establish that Mistress is a villain, with a messed up sense of morality^^ From the sound of things, I seem to have succeeded!
11448884 Ohhh, I see what they meant now. I never thought about that! I'll go ahead and read through the story so far, looking for anything like that and fixing it up. Thanks for the tip!
11448274
I added it to a TG group, but Idk if it's the group you had in mind^^
11448287
Well that would've been nice to know XD
Thanks! I'll edit those in.
11448280
I can help with that!
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/201181/tf-tg
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/839/unique-transformation
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/1937/my-little-fetish this one does have a sub folder for transformations
11448319
Thank you :D
11448635
I was afraid some colors might be hard to read^^
Could you tell me which character's color is too difficult?
Also, I can definitely say that as the story goes on, you will have to switch back to night mode.
Some of the text colors are very light, they'd almost be invisible on a white screen.
Could you also tell me which sentence is 'run on' please?
11448652
I wanted to clearly establish that Mistress is a villain, with a messed up sense of morality^^
From the sound of things, I seem to have succeeded!
11448675
I'm afraid I don't follow^^
What do you mean by "telling not showing"?
I'd love to improve this chapter, but Idk how to go about it exactly.
11448682
Here darling, hope this helps explain that
https://jerryjenkins.com/show-dont-tell/#:~:text=self%2Dediting%20checklist.-,The%20Difference%20Between%20Showing%20and%20Telling,That's%20telling.
11448884
Ohhh, I see what they meant now. I never thought about that!
I'll go ahead and read through the story so far, looking for anything like that and fixing it up.
Thanks for the tip!
11448911
No problem