The Crystal Empire faces civial strife and threats from external forces as the Cadance and Shining queral amongst each other, as well as themselves, over their new love interests. Prepare for love, lust, war, and a political dog fight.
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Still at work, but the moment my ass hits home...
Party hard while reading ♡
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Take your time, bud.
That ocellus scene was cute and the Title, a german once said, no plan survives contact with the enemy"
And becky, better watch out about the night guard.
And that female pony called resilence, funny, got a oc with the same name
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I had mentioned in a previous chapter that Benny would be showing up in Canterlot, so I had to work him into the Chapter to show he was up and around... Or at least I wanted to. I needed something more uplifting to break up a lot of the "blah" and bad news this chapter held. Plus, I always have reasons for exposing all these little details for one reason or another.
Very well said. makes me think of what I was originally called this chapter; "Even The Best Plans Are Laid To Waist," but it seemed a little too extreme to cover all the story pieces involved.
Wha? Nah. The Lunar Guard love Becky. She, unfortunately, didn't wash her hand enough while she was in the shower after her fun time, it would seem. Then for Midnight, that dude is a total gentlecolt. I doubt he would try anything.
That doctor though...
I was racking my brain trying to name that bitch. LOL!
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Of course.
Sure, when I read half of them off duty are protecting her, could not help but think/imagine her noticing them all watching her with hearts over their heads/through the Window or something.
My oc is a unicorn doctor stallion, his second name redcross, being actually a pony Version of a human. He also got a crystal pony counterpart due to a missunderstanding with a friend
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In reality, they're watching over all the humans in the area as well as the castle. Why? Well, that will be addressed later. As for now, they're sticking to the shadows and staying out of site.
...unless they accidentally spill their grape seeds on the dinner table again or cough or something like that.
Accidents do happen after all.
It's hard finding official canon characters that fit the roles needed for my story, even when falling back on the comics. OC characters can be tricky business.
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Naturally.
Ah, my friend thought due to the redcross organisation, a oc with the name in it would be unfitting, thus that change of him, much to my surprise
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Aw my poor Fleetfoot has owies and boo boos now she haz a sad
I use hugs
It wasn’t very effective
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I made it clear that Fleetfoot was in bad shape the moment she first had her legs put back in place on the battlefield. I dropped a few more hints leading up until now, but... yeah... She's gonna need some help. Certainly more than a hug.
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geez, how bad is she getting an honorable discharge why is she being forced to leave ? is she being asked to leave the crystal empire, the wonderbolts, or the human if it's the wonderbolts I can see why but in the crystal empire the weather sucks she could die out there
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Things are kind of crazy at the moment and nothing really was properly sorted out after the battle with Harmony.
As of right now, both Spitfire and Fleetfoot are in the Crystal Empire at the request of Cadance, not official orders. As far as being discharged, that hasn't been announced or determined, but both anyone who's been made aware of Fleetfoot's medical situation knows that's what's going to happen now.
As far as leaving the Crystal Empire, Fleetfoot was there join Cerb in as a Wonderbolt in a new training program. That was established way back in the first arc of CTTB. However, now her physical capabilities have drastically changed after crippling her back legs and tearing up a lot of what was connected to the associated joints and limbs.
Then again, we'll have to see where things take our heroes. After all. Ocellus was on death's bed, Ember was all sorts of fucked up, and who knows how many lives Becky saved, not to mention limbs or eyes.
...or maybe she'll become a jaded villain. Wouldn't that be neat?!
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fuck. In other words, if she was human she would pretty much be paralyzed from the waist down and would have to be in constant chronic pain and be on some sort of painkillers for the rest of her life, so fleetfoot can't fly or walk and would be confined in a pony wheelchair, which I guess was cadences reaction of well "no" cause she just realized the extent of the damage.
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I don't know if she would be paralyzed from the waist down. The issue is spinal alignment, not spinal connection or separation. The projection is severe difficulty, yes, but not loss of function. Pain will also be a factor for her to deal with, as it has been up to this point and still is, given Spitfire's comments of Fleetfoot's drinking habits along with the pain pills.
As for any further purpose for Fleetfoot, I'm sure Cerb will think of something, assuming Celestia wouldn't still want one of her famous Wonderbolt's back, regardless of her condition. That is, of course, if she's willing to accept that's the final outcome of Fleetfoot's condition.
...so many possibilities.
Not 'important'?
Very wholesome at Benny's, yet very bitter everywhere else. Dark times all over.
Reminds me of Bioshock, it had its golden age that was very impressive BUT the downfall was long and brutal.
One can only hope for better times eventually, but it seems it will take time and most importantly there will be casualties.
They lived in a hell disguised as heaven, but with the glamor removed ? Suddenly hell is what it is, unforgiving and harsh.
If they manage to rise out of the ash of their dream world, the reality might be worth living.
More importantly is that they might not just survive but live at some point something well worth it.
Very dark chapter with a breeze of hope for the future, can't say I see them overcome Chrysalis since they already are metaphorical bleeding on the floor.
Recovery needs time, but time is against them.
-Chrysalis
-Storm King
-Alicorn in personal crisis
-Everywhere chaos
Will they slowly perish? Or might there be hope yet?
Luna Ring has bloody mutch to help them with IF she make it at all... She was damaged and weaken from the beginning. Even if she can stop any and all future intrusive influences, without aid only hard times seem ahead.
Fluttershy and Rarity, Luna & Cadance, Celestia and finally Twilight are in personal crisis. I don't see them stopping Chrysalis or the Storm King even if their plans might not run smoothly.
The Crystal Empire isn't by any chance a Mobil Cityship?
I guess there isn't a Colony that can be of help to them?
Anyway... I enjoyed the art a lot and the chapter was well written 👍
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Good catch, and I fixed it. Thanks.
Yeah. I couldn't leave it all doom and gloom. Not even Rainbow Dash messing Cadance's Royal Court was enough to bright the mood on its own.
Never played the games, but I see what you mean.
Very true. Most people think that when the war is over, it's all sunshine and rainbows. In reality, there's a lot of struggle and hardship involved with trying to get back to a good place for all.
Luna Ring has bloody mutch to help them with IF she make it at all... She was damaged and weaken from the beginning. Even if she can stop any and all future intrusive influences, without aid only hard times seem ahead. Right now, it's hard to say how any of the groups would deal in case of any attack.
Well, aside from Luna or Celestia. I'm sure they'd go full-tilt ballistic on any hostile at this point. Even worse if they threatened a human.
Those mares are by far the most swamped with personal issues, but the royals themselves have responsibilities that are keeping them hammered down from dealing with many of their most personal problems.
Not in the slightest.
Another kingdom, perhaps. They haven't tried reaching out, yet.
Thanks. Hopefully, the next chapter won't be delayed, but I can't make any promises.
Drinking on the job...
Luna might need a intervention
I wonder why Luna isn't enjoying a dream realm vacation for one hour or so to unwind, she literally did it for Rainbow Dash before, so if anyone can unwind nightly, it be her.
Adulting at its best
That knowledge alone should have Chrysalis salivating on learning how to make ponies love her, it is not different than someone learning to cook, planting and caring for trees that drop eatable produce in time.
Etc etc. Changelings farming emotions probably would be like spa visits.
A full body massage is very relaxing, since slowly siphoning emotion make them sleepy, it would be perfect for them to be present and trained in the future like this perhaps later down the line of the story?
Water Bug, the love bug massage expert of Ponyville?
That was simply hilarious, especially since it's easy to imagen in one normal episode of MLP FIM
Ironically perhaps what the Tyrant Harmony broke can be mended in time by Ring Harmony, even if not... who would be better as a future doctor than a immortal with free time on its braches?
Luna Ring will need a hobby in time
If not as a doctor, perhaps a artist? Music, pictures, text based stories? Who knows?!
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You are very right about that.
Luna left Rainbow Dash alone in her dreams because she didn't need help managing nightmares. Rainbow was only lusting after Cerb, which left Luna flustered and lusting even further after Kelly. Now, the situation is completely different. Many creatures are suffering nightmares and Luna has neither Cerb nor Kelly to run to when or if her lustful thoughts need to be satiated.
Slowly, Twilight is learning how to navigate the boundaries and sensitivities of others better.
I think old Chrysalis would be salivating to take such power for herself but also wouldn't care to understand any of it. She'd rather dive in head first to take it all and expect to control it all with power and fear from that point.
I think right now, Ocellus is having too much of a problem with the love around her as it is. More than likely, any attempt to harvest even more love would cause her further discomfort.
After all, every strength can be a weakness. Any blessing can be a curse... No one really knows what's going on in this world anymore.
That was simply hilarious, especially since it's easy to imagen in one normal episode of MLP FIM
Ironically perhaps what the Tyrant Harmony broke can be mended in time by Ring Harmony, even if not... who would be better as a future doctor than a immortal with free time on its braches?
Luna Ring will need a hobby in time
If not as a doctor, perhaps a artist? Music, pictures, text based stories? Who knows?!