Very nice! I was looking forward to this!

Good art too

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Then again, with more than one royal to take the throne of the Crytal Empire and more than one human for the residents of the vulnerable Empire to love and rely on, could a new threat be in the making?

Crystal

Fun fact: "Zebra have 40 teeth as adults".
That what i was remembering when i see Zecora's pictures.

No forced idiot balls for anycreatures anymore, what will RainbowDash be unchanged? Can she even access Rainboom anymore?
If yes, will more Cutie Mark blessed heros apper?

Is the Royal Curse activ anymore? It was Harmony that keep the Royals eternaly young. When Luna Rose becomes the new Harmony, will she be able to return imortality towards age?
Their world is a beacon of hope. One darkness was defeated and that might just be one of many.
Is there a Alliance of Survivers?
'Light' or 'Shadow'
vs
The all consuming 'Darkness'?!

"You have no need to apologize. We know that your wounds of the heart are just as severe as those any doctor could stitch or mend. You've been through so much, and when you needed them most… we stepped in to do what they would not. But that might not be enough to calm your concerns that it could happen again."

That said, every real emergency doctors and hospital will face will be cripping or lethal until they learn trough mistakes. The death will be High but since Stallions can now become active and start Herds one sexual urges are no longer suppressed, life will find a way...

Slowly, Thunder hopped up and laid down to face away from Cerb. Then, surprised again, Cerb reached out and pulled her against him.

Pony snuggels

"The flesh has been made weak, while the will remains strong. A new remedy is needed to keep the blood where it would belong. Closing a wound for our friends should not require a suture. A quick fix for wounds should make a more promising future."

Healing fast don't fix Healing wrong... Bone can heal the wrong way for example...

Sooo... Gruff body is still alive? I wonder if he can recover or if his still living body can be put to use.
Potion are Medications. Medications to high or low or mixed incorrectly or to the wrong race can be poisen, lethal perhaps. It will probably take lifetimes to rediscover the science of Alchemy...

Great first chapter. Everyone will needs months of recovery time. Literally everyone with exception to Becky, they all got fucked up. Or was Lumberman coming of easy? Not sure...

What season was it before it all started?
Because so far i can see Chrysalis and the Storm King became a problem, the Bugwaifu might become a ally if her food demand is meet.
Logically they are the most valuable ally or worst enemy, since the infiltration is unrivaled and their Emotivore nature makes them perfect to for all nations to hire for all areas of their nation:
- Educational and emotional care.
- Medical support of the old and sick ponies.
- Military use inside and outside.
- For politics and espionage.
- Getting Bugwaifu's to singels. (Seriously, I can see orgys happen and it will be the easy and fast way for emotion harvests...)

“It’s my fault you three weren’t better protected. Now Peter is scared all the time, still being so close to the Everfree Forest. He can’t sleep because of it, which puts him in constant danger, and he’s not going to heal any faster because of it.” She hugged a little tighter. “I don’t want him to go, either.”

All Predators are unguided... Monster Hunter Guilds will be needed if Luna Rose can't keep them in check...

“Please, nothing,” Cadance quickly responded firmly. “The fact you can still stand is nothing short of miraculous, but you have more than answered the call. You need to rest, as we all do. You, as much as Justin and Fleetfoot, need to let your wounds heal."

Will Ember come and stay in the Crystal Empire? If yes, found Crystal Slifers con be nom-nom out of their body
Damn... Ember will be surrounded 24/7 by Food

How will they keep up Justin meat supplies up? I hope the have Chicken in the Crystal Empire for egg and meat...

Since the Griffon Lands no longer are hold by Harmony in poverty, will the civilians take their corrupt leaders apart and start anew?

Sooo... Sphinx was one of the imortal races if i don't missremember things. A leader for the Griffons perhaps?

The Seaponys will be forwarned by Chris about the Stormking invasion plans? I actually would welcome him coming once everyone recovered and him getting the Shit kicked out of him

Is the Dragon Lord Scepter still working? Or was it a Sailor Moon toy empowered by Harmony?

I know it is literally to soon to ask a d will probably never be part of thus story but...
Is Harmony protection only Equus/ Equis wide because the Universe only us one Planet, Moon and Sun big? Or could stay expand into Space...
'MLP Space Adventures are Magic'

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Very nice! I was looking forward to this!

Glad I was finally able to bring it.

Good art too

Thanks. I've come a long way, but still got a long way to go.

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mhm, keep up the good work!

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Story description:

Then again, with more than one royal to take the throne of the Crytal Empire and more than one human for the residents of the vulnerable Empire to love and rely on, could a new threat be in the making?

Crystal

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Fun fact: "Zebra have 40 teeth as adults".
That what i was remembering when i see Zecora's pictures.

Yeah... The teeth do come off as kind of odd that close up.

No forced idiot balls for anycreatures anymore, what will RainbowDash be unchanged? Can she even access Rainboom anymore?
If yes, will more Cutie Mark blessed heros apper?

Rainbow has been unchained since meeting the humans and spending time with them. It has yet to be seen if Rainbow can still access her rainboom since Harmony has been removed, but it would seem unlikely that she would have lost that power.

As for creating more cutie marks like she did for Thunder Glide and Oven Fresh... that seemed more like a side effect of Harmony's direct influence.

Is the Royal Curse activ anymore? It was Harmony that keep the Royals eternaly young. When Luna Rose becomes the new Harmony, will she be able to return imortality towards age?

It was stated that with Luna Ring taking over, everything would go back to normal and eventually she would be strong enough to allow for changes to be made. So, at this point, it can't be clearly stated where the curse is powered up at.

Their world is a beacon of hope. One darkness was defeated and that might just be one of many.
Is there a Alliance of Survivers?
'Light' or 'Shadow'
vs
The all consuming 'Darkness'?!

It's not known how many worlds were lost to The Darkness, but the Rainbow Dash Harmony was the only "Lone" survivor outside of the Echoes to be known so far.

Otherwise, the only other wildcard was the Crystal Mandala, the one Echo who was allowed to get away before the battle ended.

Not really sure where she ventured off to, since she decided to forge a new path away from Sword.

"You have no need to apologize. We know that your wounds of the heart are just as severe as those any doctor could stitch or mend. You've been through so much, and when you needed them most… we stepped in to do what they would not. But that might not be enough to calm your concerns that it could happen again."

That said, every real emergency doctors and hospital will face will be cripping or lethal until they learn trough mistakes. The death will be High but since Stallions can now become active and start Herds one sexual urges are no longer suppressed, life will find a way...

There aren't too many properly educated about sex yet... and that includes Cadance and the Wonderbolts. So, there is still a lot of growing pains that will have to be dealt with.

Slowly, Thunder hopped up and laid down to face away from Cerb. Then, surprised again, Cerb reached out and pulled her against him.

Pony snuggels

It's moments like that which always reminds me of the chapter 51 "The Power of Touch: Is That How You Really Feel?"

"The flesh has been made weak, while the will remains strong. A new remedy is needed to keep the blood where it would belong. Closing a wound for our friends should not require a suture. A quick fix for wounds should make a more promising future."

Healing fast don't fix Healing wrong... Bone can heal the wrong way for example...

Becky already made a good point the first time addressing some of the issues with Zecora and Sunburst about healing potions to cure her. One quick and easy fix could easily cause even greater damages by accident, so we'll have to see where this leads.

Sooo... Gruff body is still alive? I wonder if he can recover or if his still living body can be put to use.

It was only Guff's mind/soul that was lost, not his body.

Potion are Medications. Medications to high or low or mixed incorrectly or to the wrong race can be poisen, lethal perhaps. It will probably take lifetimes to rediscover the science of Alchemy...

You're getting ahead of me, bro. 😅

Great first chapter. Everyone will needs months of recovery time. Literally everyone with exception to Becky, they all got fucked up. Or was Lumberman coming of easy? Not sure...

Really it was Cerb and Chris that took the worst of injuries for the humans. Kelly split her lip and Benny took a few hits, but Lumberman didn't take charging too far into the front lines and Becky was kept far to the rear.

What season was it before it all started?

Season 6. The first chapter started the day after airing "No Second Prances." The next big event (episode) in the series would have been Rainbow finally getting accepted into the Wonderbolts, but my story already accelerated that event.

Because so far i can see Chrysalis and the Storm King became a problem, the Bugwaifu might become a ally if her food demand is meet.

Crysalis was to be the season's final boss to fight, but she's already been shown to have made changes to speed and targets of her plan win infiltrating Canterlot Castle before Thorax even showed up. Of course, that was a consequence of the humans showing up and Harmony having no ability to plan and use whispers around them.

The Storm King, though? He's a complete unknown at this point.

Logically they are the most valuable ally or worst enemy, since the infiltration is unrivaled and their Emotivore nature makes them perfect to for all nations to hire for all areas of their nation:
- Educational and emotional care.
- Medical support of the old and sick ponies.
- Military use inside and outside.
- For politics and espionage.
- Getting Bugwaifu's to singels. (Seriously, I can see orgys happen and it will be the easy and fast way for emotion harvests...)

The changelings could be both a great threat or a great asset. How it all plays out will be a surprise, though.

“It’s my fault you three weren’t better protected. Now Peter is scared all the time, still being so close to the Everfree Forest. He can’t sleep because of it, which puts him in constant danger, and he’s not going to heal any faster because of it.” She hugged a little tighter. “I don’t want him to go, either.”

All Predators are unguided... Monster Hunter Guilds will be needed if Luna Rose can't keep them in check...

The forest will be a little less safe for a while, that is true. It's a good thing the Deer Kin are stepping up.

“Please, nothing,” Cadance quickly responded firmly. “The fact you can still stand is nothing short of miraculous, but you have more than answered the call. You need to rest, as we all do. You, as much as Justin and Fleetfoot, need to let your wounds heal."

Will Ember come and stay in the Crystal Empire? If yes, found Crystal Slifers con be nom-nom out of their body
Damn... Ember will be surrounded 24/7 by Food

There will be plenty of visitors to the Crystal Empire.

How will they keep up Justin meat supplies up? I hope the have Chicken in the Crystal Empire for egg and meat...

As of right now, all they have is whatever amount of owlbear was given to them. After that... no more meat.

Since the Griffon Lands no longer are hold by Harmony in poverty, will the civilians take their corrupt leaders apart and start anew?

They would have to want to. It's just as likely that leaders double down and turn even more tyrannical.

Anything could happen.

Sooo... Sphinx was one of the imortal races if i don't missremember things. A leader for the Griffons perhaps?

A sphinx? Maybe for the Saddle Arabians.

The Seaponys will be forwarned by Chris about the Stormking invasion plans? I actually would welcome him coming once everyone recovered and him getting the Shit kicked out of him

Sadly, our humans entered Equestria in April 2016. The Storm King wasn't shown until June (I think?) of 2017 in the first trailer for the movie. Even then, in the trailer, Tempest was built up to be the main villain, not him.

The only one who left who would know of the plans would be Luna Ring, and she's not able to communicate for at least another year. Of course, that's just an estimated time frame.

Is the Dragon Lord Scepter still working? Or was it a Sailor Moon toy empowered by Harmony?

I'll say all Harmony empowered items should still be in play. The only exceptions would be the brief period where the tree was removed and Luna Ring was still trying to get in tune with the world she had connected herself to.

So, that leaves a day or two for some protective spells to possibly falter to some degree.

I know it is literally to soon to ask a d will probably never be part of thus story but...
Is Harmony protection only Equus/ Equis wide because the Universe only us one Planet, Moon and Sun big? Or could stay expand into Space...
'MLP Space Adventures are Magic'

Harmony's protection extended around her dimension, not the planet. That would be both much larger, but also notionally easier to protect when factored in terms of vectors as opposed to measurable units.

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im guessing everyone is in a buttload of pain

kinda still sad about my great and powerful waifu though. knowing me if i was there id spend every moment at the spot trixie vanished waiting for her to come back rain or shine regardless of health despite my romantic feelings for rarity and flutters im not even sure what those two and the others would do though if they kept seeing me there waiting

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im guessing everyone is in a buttload of pain

Oh, yeah. Everybody is in hard recovery mode after this last fight. If not from the physical beatings and injuries, then the magic exhaustion has been rather taxing.

kinda still sad about my great and powerful waifu though. knowing me if i was there id spend every moment at the spot trixie vanished waiting for her to come back rain or shine regardless of health despite my romantic feelings for rarity and flutters

Everything changed for Trixie when she brought the humans to Ponyville. And in the end, it all came full circle. From her tour, her spell, and even Starlight's warning about a repeat of attempting her spell (not sure if anyone caught that) in chapter 2.

As for Flutters and Rarity, they have some growing pains they're going to have to suffer through.

im not even sure what those two and the others would do though if they kept seeing me there waiting

We all grieve in our own ways at our own pace. There will be more grief to confront before any real progress is made, so get ready for that.

Oh lord, that speech Rarity had to do was FULL of irony considering what happened with Justin.

And hooooly crap it's back! Though I may have to re-read the first story again to remember some details

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Oh lord, that speech Rarity had to do was FULL of irony considering what happened with Justin.

Rarity's speech was just as much an act of self-admonishment for her poor choices that pushed Cerb away as it was the same that pushed Discord and Trixie away. She realized too late that if you really are going to accept someone for who they are, then you have to accept them holistically. If not, you won't have the opportunity to be there for them when they need you the most, as you will have cut yourself out of their lives.

And hooooly crap it's back! Though I may have to re-read the first story again to remember some details

Yeah. Black-Soul spent a week before the release to blaze through the first arc again just to freshen up. Otherwise, if you have any questions along the way, feel free to ask.

The medical science is the most critical they need to research and developing.
Ponies dying need to be stocked up for autopsy, so doctors can learn about the body until they can make anatomical accurately puppets to learn from.

Acupuncture is a very effective way to heal, but how to get there within a lifetime?

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The medical science is the most critical they need to research and developing.
Ponies dying need to be stocked up for autopsy, so doctors can learn about the body until they can make anatomical accurately puppets to learn from.

Lots of improvements need to be made. How they go about it have yet to be decided.

Acupuncture is a very effective way to heal, but how to get there within a lifetime?

That's a difficult science to get into without any proper training.