The Crystal Empire faces civial strife and threats from external forces as the Cadance and Shining queral amongst each other, as well as themselves, over their new love interests. Prepare for love, lust, war, and a political dog fight.
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Nicely done! And interesting take about the meat thing.
When it comes to cerb, i can understand him, its always hard for veterans.
Something i noticed
is there not the " missing?
Great chapter showing the aftermath that get never shown on action movies and Indiana Jones movies.
There is always a before and after. The adventures are just a part of life and usually things rather get more complicated than easyer.
The Crystal Empire was probably spared from pandemic waves from being out of time and having to face things like the 'common cold'. But other things like the weather and wildlife is now unpredictable.
If the are financial unstable than things get even more dicy...
Month of recover for all humans, perfect time to establish side characters and hint of villain of the script now going off the script.
But who knows? Maybe one or the other villain of the script become unexpectedly a anti-hero off the script?
Alternativ we might get to skip Tirek sucking off ponys like a 2 bit whore for their magic or it get delayed...
The Royal Curse probably is what keeps Villains also young? Since the Storm King is to die one way or another, maybe he can get a rather hilarious two pump champ ending and we get rather someone like Tempest as seriouse opposition. Tempest did give the Dtorm King like 8/10 of his success, so now that Harmony stopped holding the Storm Kings promises over her head i could see her taking what she has earned gor years. A chance to talk and when denied, take what is needed to restore her horn...
Your art was great and i am rather surprised how mutch the face expression gives away.
The Steak of Owlbear don't look to bad either.
Now that Harmony isn't mind whipping anyone, maybe we can spread medical and construction work knowledge while our heros recover?
The can dictated and give out the knowledge like Candy to all nations for mutual benefishal growth!
One question before i end this string of comments:
Did you remember to use
' https://ttsreader.com/ '
to not have to read it all on your own?
so im guessing cadance and shining are or going to be divorced. i wonder who would get custody or at least visitation rights to see little flurry im also hoping cerb will be a good dad to her in the meantime.
ps im still hoping for that tshundere queen chrysalis i mentioned in the last arc
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Yeah. There's plenty of herbivores that will capitalize on certain animal-based nutrition when they can. Sometimes it's as simple as chewing up some bones for iron or calcium (presumably). However, there are videos you can find of horses snacking on small birds, baby chickens in particular.
That part of Cerb will play a larger role in the near future when some old friends pay a visit.
Yeah, I somehow missed that during an edit. Thanks for the catch.
Honestly love the whole take on Shining and Cadences separation...even if it means leaving all of Cadences anguishes, problems and struggles on Cerbs shoulders to carry.
Oh well, they're both mentally and spiritually good for each other right now, so that's not a big issue.
(Oh, and those wonderbolts NEED to get laid. Not even saying that as a joke, it's hilarious seeing Equestrias top fliers reduced to fillies when it comes to Cerb...thankfully they can do their jobs while scheming.)
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a friend of mine has it that they eat fish and poultry on special occasions.
I can understand cerb, as I got an OC with similar problems, that started a small argument
well, I hope she wont overdose it, saw a "comedy video" about that
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So true. In this case, a big repercussion of removing Harmony was also removing all the environmental strings she was pulling. Luna Ring can only do so much at this point.
It was hinted at in the end of the last arc the even the wildlife around the Everfree Forest was acting unusual. So, who knows what to expect?
If one nation is affected, who knows which others might be?
That's the plan
I won't give away anything of what to expect, but it's safe to say that some characters might end up changing their mentalities or methods without Harmony whispering to them what to think or feel.
The timeline for the Storm King and Tempest could potentially be altered, if not, their military efforts leading up to the prequels of comics that outlined what happened before the movie. With that in mind, who knows what could happen since Kelly will be in the Abyssinian Empire for a while.
Also, I don't think I would do a villain like that. Maybe outsmarted, poisoned, trapped, or assassinated... but not overpowered and stomped out like a chump. Not unless it was established that he was more of a spell caster than a skilled fighter or tactician. Then, yeah... Then he could be slapped around.
The face was about all I got down well enough in my humble opinion. I still really need to up my hair illustration abilities.
I didn't hate the steak, but I think I undersold the depth of detail I was aiming for with the realism I was referencing. In that case, less might have been more, but it still turned out better than I could have done months ago.
One step at a time. They gotta fix themselves before they can fix a population.
Nope. I usually prefer to read the comments as opposed to have them read to me.
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Has my writing been so predictable in the past?
Okay, maybe some of the pairings were obvious, but not all the conflicts were so cut and dry. So, just be patient and see how things pan out for the lovely couple.
Cerb has always been awesome to Flurryheart, just like Becky was as well. Honestly, no matter how it ends for any of those involved, I'm sure Flurry will be more than lovingly tended to.
I have some interesting plans for the twisted love-sucking queen. Not just her, but the changelings overall.
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I was very careful with the attraction Cadance had with Cerb from very early on. It was never meant to be taken with wreckless abandonment or no consideration for others involved. Not only did that include Rarity and Fluttershy, but Shining and Cerb as well. Not to mention, she questioned herself so many times what it was she was wanting or why she even had such powerful feelings, only to direct them back to Shining.
Now, without Shining, even when Cerb is so vulnerable physically, mentally, and emotionally, her true emotions won't allow her to mindlessly throw herself at Cerb. She needs support, stability, confirmation, and someone she can rely on to be real and honest with her more than the fantastical thoughts she was dreaming of earlier.
If anything, this might be the romance story that Cerb's first two mares fell short of if Cadance is careful with how she approaches him and treats their relationship.
At the same time, Rainbow Dash and Thunder might be fooling themselves, while the two Wonderbolts could end up wisely positioning themselves right where they want to be if Cerb is afraid of ruining a married couple.
I tend to agree. Cadance is so kind-hearted, even with all her emotional baggage. Cerb is probably the perfect guy to help her unload it all.
Those two are still clueless about sex as well, making future hilarity all that more promising. However, at the same time, I have some big plans for them.
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When you say "they," do you mean your friend who is a vegetarian or horses who eat fish and poultry?
It happens.
And overdose won't be likely, as only Becky or medical staff will provide any doses of the harder drugs and the rest of the medication will only be provided as needed.
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the latter.
its a bit complicated.
well if you really wanna know
and if you need a laugh
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Yeah... that'll do it.
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good
Hm... So many mares yet so few stallions. But worst case the wonderbolts try find a mate in crystal pony stallions.
Weather was always hard in the Crystal Empire.
Unless they find a relatively stable method to change it, they have to evacuat it.
To bad they can simply fly the Crystal City like in Stargate Atlantis.
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Yeah, because these mares are all about giving up and moving on.
It's always been hard, but now it's even harder.
Things might end up getting harder.