Sassy Saddles has gotten used to being alone. It doesn't bother her any more. Why then, does her heart race around Anon the human? Can she work up the courage to tell him her darkest secret?
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The engineer anon stuff almost makes it sound like a Technology Isn't Magic story. Love the light trolling with the invention of the microwave (gasp!)
The (first) picture says cute mare, but the writing says vicious landlord. Scary.
liking this so far! And the images are adorable!
Huh, what's funny is that this is a bit of a break from the usual HiE pattern. It feels like most of the time, the human protagonist will elicit a strong reaction of some sort from the princesses, whether becoming their bestest friend immediately or becoming irrationally afraid of him because he is different (or they are just completely absent in the first place). Not as many where they are outright uninterested and treat the limited interactions with the human as something mundane and routine. Narrative-wise it makes sense, you want to acknowledge that he met the rulers at least once and needed some initial assistance to establish himself, but nevertheless don't want the diarchs to play a significant role in the story as they inevitably would if they had any personal interest (positive or negative) in the protagonist's life. But on the other hand, the princesses are usually portrayed as being very friendly and interested in anything new or unusual (or so xenophobic that they wouldn't allow an alien to have free reign to go and do as he pleases), so this does come across as a little odd for them.
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Humans have canonically interacted with ponies before. Previous generations, though. Ancient history.
The kind of history only an alicorn might know. Makes for a story hook that many find difficult to resist.
Equally plausible that it is so ancient that nobody at all remembers, as suggested by the reaction of the ruler in this story. I'm looking forward to seeing how things turn out.
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Does that include "converted" humans?
I can think about of few unique approaches, like Goldfur's
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Heh, yeah, because microwave ovens had saw exactly this history. Before Radar Range kitchen oven was introduced, they were a diner curiosity.
I do not agree with opinion that they are lazy. Yes, there are cheap ovens which can't do much but heat food. But add rotating stand, convector and grill heater - and you get pretty handy tool to make some more complex stuff.
Do you see this word that I have marked?
I have a serious question about this. Is there Italy in Equestria? How can there be an Italian restaurant here? Do you understand that this detail violates the perception of this world that you are writing about?
As far as I understand, there will be a lot of such (human details from planet Earth) in this story. And that's really the problem with you as a writer. You should not forget that you are writing a story about another world. And this magical world has its own peculiarities.
To be continued...
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How did they have an Indian Restaurant in the show? For all we the reader knows, the Italian reference was something that Anon was familiar with and went with it. There are a lot of parallels in Equestria as well as the silly horse puns.
Anyway, your story hooked me and for that, props to you!
Here's a gold star: ⭐
Silly workaholic...
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Ok and? Let them be, this is why its called Fanfiction.net where people can make stories that aren’t canon, also take in consideration Anon is a human being he still has human instincts and maybe in the ITALIAN restaurant it seemed to remind him of back home even though it may not even be an Italian restaurant to the ponies it could be something entirely different. If you don’t like it then don’t read it simple.