Sassy Saddles has gotten used to being alone. It doesn't bother her any more. Why then, does her heart race around Anon the human? Can she work up the courage to tell him her darkest secret?
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Ok, full disclosure, I'm a dirty pervert and this is my favorite chapter so far.
This story was decent and all and then someone gave the pacing and development an 8 Loki and a line of Adderall. I dealt with that untill this line which perfectly sums up the problem/confusion.
How would he know this? They never talked about it (he had the one shower yes but there was no mention [to my memory at least, I may be completely wrong here]) and even if that one shower was hot as hell she had endured an amount of stuff that would make a person want a hotter than normal shower.
TL;DR the pacing jumped like crazy and they seem to know books more about each other than seemingly possible for two people who met HOURS ago and somehow declared their love for one another.
Haha that spell is one heck of a drug, eh?
Something that just occurred to us... Stallions wouldn't have the time honored tradition of uriscription in snow! 😱
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To be fair, people in love generally overstate the good parts of others, for example, Sassy instantly thought he was kind and gentle only after he dried her off in the rain and let her sleep in the bed. Anon instantly thought good of her for her capacity of moving the machine for long miles in the rain and storm, for not having a prejudice against him, and also due to her actually caring about him (i.e asking about humans, his family, etc), and then she also worried about him when she asked whether he was sad by the weariness that ponies had.
I actually think the romance was very believable and congratulate the author for having the ability to do a 24-hour romance so smooth, also, the only real problem I have is with Luna randomly deciding to pry in, but that's a minor thing, so whatever.