He sullied the Princess outside of marriage. Now he's locked in for sure! And yes, busting inside is the best. Anon needs to just keeping doing that and get her knocked up and married. It's only proper you know...

Not bad, glad I finally had time to give this a read. Can't wait to see how the situation with Luna plays out.

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People do screw on first dates and she's never had anyone pursue her before, making it exciting. That's one hell of a virgin streak. I remember jumping at the first woman that was willing. The alien thing does interfere though.

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True, I hope to explain it further, in the next chapters.

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I'm not disparaging the premise of the fiction, but when you have an editor who isn't able to catch things like this, your brain does a double-take to have to re-read it to make sense of what the sentence *should be*, and this breaks the flow of the story, and thus the reader's immersion in it.

I wonder what is making Celestia have doubts about their relationship?

Free Relationship Advice: this is why talking about how you feel is important. It lets the other person know that there even is a problem. Then you can talk about what caused the problem. Then you can talk about what can be done to fix the problem.