11218530 I thank you for your contribution to this topic. I know about the general world situation right now, and I really think you have a great point. It was just a foundation, but I see that you managed to do it better than I did. I cannot thank you enough for addressing this. On a side note, would you like me to replace my conversation with yours? It just seems right. Of course, I will credit you in the author's notes.
I know the first chapter is important to keep the viewer interested in the story, and I’m glad you took the time to come up with something better, it just shows that different perspectives can create wonders for the story.
11218532 I don’t know if I should address it because it might ruin the fun later on. For now, I’m just going to say that I see your point and I will use it to correct the story once it gets confusing. Thanks for addressing it.
11218562 It's entirely up to you, it is YOUR story after all. I just mostly want you to be aware of things I've learned and seen since I've been here on this site for oh, 10 years now? Damn it's been a long time.
Feel free to if you want and add more to it as well. Perhaps mention notable landmarks of nature on earth? Lost opportunities that he's got to do because of her kindness?
Also, Anon's actions and circumstances are absolutely relatable and believable. The pacing is good, him working like an average functional person making a decent living and not being a straight up a$$hole or push over is seriously refreshing. I can easily see myself in his shoes aside from losing a parent and friend. I lost my infant son though, miss him everyday. It's been 3 years and he'd be 4 this year. But my point is, all of his struggles and living life in Equestria is well portrayed. No instant romance, no instant conflict, no rush to treat him like garbage for merely existing and 2 years is a good way of showing how long he's adapted.
I cannot speak for Anon, but 2 years go by and I certainly would be looking at the pony ladies in that funny way. Pardon my crudeness, but I can't imagine Anon not having jacked off quite a few times since he's been there. Him wanting to have love is nice but he's mentioned wanting to have someone to have sex with too. He better learn to find the lady species of Equus attractive for he's out of luck.
11218628 Alright. I think I can do that later this week. Thanks for sharing your story with me. It warms my heart that veterans like you help new fic writers.
I hope you the best, and hopefully, a good read too later on when I work on this story some more.
11219614 There's no guarantee the future will be a destruction hell hole. Everyone thought the world was going to be destroyed during the cold war, but that didn't happen. I do get your point though, however specific that year is.
Up to my eyeballs in work, so I'm adding this to my read later list for when I have more time, also, instant fave 'cause all the chapters names are songs I've listened to. Very clever, high five and thumbs up!
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https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/984726/addressing-something-about-the-story Blog entry about this problem.
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I thank you for your contribution to this topic. I know about the general world situation right now, and I really think you have a great point. It was just a foundation, but I see that you managed to do it better than I did. I cannot thank you enough for addressing this. On a side note, would you like me to replace my conversation with yours? It just seems right. Of course, I will credit you in the author's notes.
I know the first chapter is important to keep the viewer interested in the story, and I’m glad you took the time to come up with something better, it just shows that different perspectives can create wonders for the story.
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I don’t know if I should address it because it might ruin the fun later on. For now, I’m just going to say that I see your point and I will use it to correct the story once it gets confusing. Thanks for addressing it.
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It's entirely up to you, it is YOUR story after all. I just mostly want you to be aware of things I've learned and seen since I've been here on this site for oh, 10 years now? Damn it's been a long time.
Feel free to if you want and add more to it as well. Perhaps mention notable landmarks of nature on earth? Lost opportunities that he's got to do because of her kindness?
Also, Anon's actions and circumstances are absolutely relatable and believable. The pacing is good, him working like an average functional person making a decent living and not being a straight up a$$hole or push over is seriously refreshing. I can easily see myself in his shoes aside from losing a parent and friend. I lost my infant son though, miss him everyday. It's been 3 years and he'd be 4 this year. But my point is, all of his struggles and living life in Equestria is well portrayed. No instant romance, no instant conflict, no rush to treat him like garbage for merely existing and 2 years is a good way of showing how long he's adapted.
I cannot speak for Anon, but 2 years go by and I certainly would be looking at the pony ladies in that funny way. Pardon my crudeness, but I can't imagine Anon not having jacked off quite a few times since he's been there. Him wanting to have love is nice but he's mentioned wanting to have someone to have sex with too. He better learn to find the lady species of Equus attractive for he's out of luck.
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Alright. I think I can do that later this week. Thanks for sharing your story with me. It warms my heart that veterans like you help new fic writers.
I hope you the best, and hopefully, a good read too later on when I work on this story some more.
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There's no guarantee the future will be a destruction hell hole. Everyone thought the world was going to be destroyed during the cold war, but that didn't happen. I do get your point though, however specific that year is.
Up to my eyeballs in work, so I'm adding this to my read later list for when I have more time, also, instant fave 'cause all the chapters names are songs I've listened to. Very clever, high five and thumbs up!
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Thanks!