It had… Well, this world is so clean. So… Free of human destruction. I have never seen anything like that. Only in photos and movies, this will never exist on earth again…” You replied with sadness.
Seriously? The world is fine and still clean. Rampant polution is more or less isolated to certain countries. Why does this self flagelation of humanity always appears in these fics? The story is still good but this scene really drags it down.
11218277 I agree quite well, more often I see humanity painted as this violent brutal force that ruins everything it touches, we've got both good and bad people, plus ponies use coal, they pollute about as much as 1800's industrialized Britain does I think. They also have electric lighting and hydroelectric dams so I assume they also use coal in power plants too, lmfao
11226297 I’m sorry you feel that way, thanks for correcting this one. It does sound a bit out of place, but I try to do my best, and sometimes, my editor can’t catch those misspellings either. But I feel like both he and I did a decent job and it is readable.
Seriously? The world is fine and still clean. Rampant polution is more or less isolated to certain countries. Why does this self flagelation of humanity always appears in these fics? The story is still good but this scene really drags it down.
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I agree quite well, more often I see humanity painted as this violent brutal force that ruins everything it touches, we've got both good and bad people, plus ponies use coal, they pollute about as much as 1800's industrialized Britain does I think. They also have electric lighting and hydroelectric dams so I assume they also use coal in power plants too, lmfao
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I also imagined anon must be from 2350 or something.
Christ, this is so full of spelling and grammatical errors; it's seriously immersion-breaking.
>In a manner of fact, there is a Princess.
Like this, to name only one example.
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I’m sorry you feel that way, thanks for correcting this one. It does sound a bit out of place, but I try to do my best, and sometimes, my editor can’t catch those misspellings either. But I feel like both he and I did a decent job and it is readable.
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Also nice description xD
The other story was better, I don't know why the author thinks making him act like a beta is a improvement.
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Personally, I don't think the author tried very hard while creating the Anonymous character.