awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

Is this an MLP and rosario+vampire crossover?

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Thank you so much for the support! I’ll keep chapters coming out if you enjoy the story this much!

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It’s technically a crossover with “Rosario + Vampire” and “Welcome to Demon School, Iruma-kun!”. I’m including elements from both of these anime into this story.

If you need an OC, let me know.

ya know something you all. if grogar got to the poor girl first then he would of wiped her memory of the place clean and sent her home. but the dummy trixie ate the poor girl now the headmaster gorgar has to think of something on what happened to tell the family. if i was there i'd bust trixie's head hard for the stupid thing she'd done.

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My Saiyan, I thought of that, but there is a reason within the story as to why he didn’t try to save her. I’m not saying what it is. You’ll have wait and see for yourself.

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well i hope that poor girl gets out of this safely down the line. other wise things will not be pretty for trixie in her 'short' time in the story.

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I’ll let you know, my Saiyan! I might need one in future chapters. Plus, I plan on doing sequels of this story going by all of Spike’s high school years. From freshman to graduation! You excited? I’m excited.

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No spoilers as to the fate of the girl. Also, why did you put air quotes on “short”? I don’t get it.

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i have friends and connections with others that can 'go through walls'.
(a red and black spandex man with so many guns walks in) someone ordered a hit man? beacuse i'm the best at the wall game.
easy there deadpool. not yet.

Please tell me Trixie's gonna get what's coming to her.

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following

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your not the only one on that dude.

Haven’t read the first chapter yet, but the summary has my interests. But due to not having a lot of time rn, mostly due to it being quarter to one in the morning where I am RN, so I’ll read this when I have the chance, and if I like it, it’s getting a Like, and if I like it enough, it’s going in my Fav’s folder.

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Thanks, my Saiyan!

This.. Peeked my interest. Read Rosario + Vampire and loved it so this will be a treat

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I had this idea of providing small guides to monster species in this story as it goes along.

I have to ask was the human that got eaten Twilight?

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No. It wasn’t Twilight. The girl that got eaten was human. Twilight is a vampire.

Not totally sure if creating a species out of whole-cloth is necessary. "Vashtas" seem like Lamia, but with extra parts. In such a case, they could be rendered as lamiai or empousae, which do essentially the same thing (transform under a human guise, seduce or lure away a hapless human, and then eat their flesh).

Aside from that, the writing's a biit heavy-handed and on the nose, but aside from that, seems fine. It's interesting seeing a human in these kinds of stories actually die, even if it was V O R E.

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Vashta are meant to be creations of my own. Also, this is one of my earlier chapters. I like to think I’ve refined my work since then