CONTINUE! For the love of Luna (and Shield) Continue. This is written in a GREAT way! Captivated me from the first few words.

And the two seperate parts at the beginning? Genius! Makes me think of a Dan-Brown kind of writing style.

Well done, and please please PLEASE write a second chapter! PS: You're on EQAD too, how I found you :P

Please take time to note that a female pony is not a woman and thus cannot have a womanhood. This has been a message from the Royal Equestrian Pedantry Society. We now return you to your regularly scheduled programing.
P.S. do continue this it is not bad.

1275688 I noticed that too.

I rarely get so, aroused by clop, but this my friend, this got me there. Good show boyo!

P.S would love to see more of your hard work.

...Perhaps make more? Perhaps? There is no perhaps. Make. More.
Please?

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Ha, hard work. Pun not intended?

1277883 Not intended indeed, but if it gets the job done, then it gets the job done.

I'll make that edit darthrex, thank's for pointing it out.

Thanks a ton for the support, guys! I'm really glad you liked it. I am planning on writing at least one more chapter. We'll see if I want to take this into a full story by the end of it.

Once again, I really appreciate all your comments and your kind words!

I am an easy person when it comes to criticism, too, and this is the first sexual piece I've ever written, so if you have any critiques be sure not to withhold them!

-Idylia

There is no image worthy of this clop...

Please continue. It doesn't have to be clop-fic, just continue.

My thoughts...
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This was good, it worth continuing and there a lot of ways this story could go. Plus there's always that scene where Luna turns into NMM and it creates a nice bit of drama. On of my favorite examples of this type of fic The Longest Journey it's about Luna's guard/friend that has wandered Equestria for over 1,000 years non-aging (grant it he was 46), whom was half blind due to Nightmare Moon sending him through a stained glass window which broke several bones and left one eye gauged out and with a combination of dark magic from the wound and being too stubborn to die awaits Luna's return.

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I have heard about that fic, but haven't read it. Perhaps I should!

I have some ideas for how the whole thing will resolve. I want this to be romance, though, not just purely for the smut. And that's what makes the planning so difficult for me. The inbetweens (between the meeting and the end) of romance both make the story and are so hard to do correctly.

Thank you very much for your feedback. I'm glad you liked it.

Secret love is the best kind of love. Do continue, I want to see the event that drives Luna over the edge.

This was really good! I enjoyed this.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png

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I agree. I'm really glad to be hearing that you guys are interested in the plot... I have a niggling feeling inside of me that makes me want to make my fics actually use the heavy emotions that sex elicits. To hear that there are people reading it for that reason makes it feel really great and well-received. Thanks guys.

In any case, I just want you guys to know that I have chapter 1 of another fic done already. I'm planning on releasing that fic all at once, though. Personally I feel like breaking the immersion of a love story can really detract from it, so I want the first impression to be the whole impression for that one.

Perhaps I'll write chapter 2 to this as a holdover, though. Not sure how many chapters I'm thinking for this one. Probably between 4 and 6.

Thank you for your kind words,

Remember, if you did or didn't like the story for any reason, remember to comment so I can grow as a writer! Thank you all very much.

moar puhweeze?

(Steps on soapbox)MOOOOOAAAAAR!!!!!... Please

Great story though I liked it keep going with whatever you like I'm following.... In a non creeper way lol lol

CONTINUE Y/N? YES FOR FUCK SAKE YES!

Great story, please continue. If I have to say something, it's that I'm not sure what the title is going for.

more
:D

Yeah, please continue this.

LOVE the cover image.

I have another luna fanfic to write.... And its about........
Cadence puts the love spell on luna and celestia to stop there fighting but...... Things quickly go out of hoof.........

One of the best Luna clopfics I have read now please make more pinkie pie promise you'll make more please?

I have already started on a second chapter.

Thank you all for your kind words <3 Expect it within a couple days.

I would recommend changing the title picture to a picture of pony Luna, as a human Luna picture confuses the reader slightly when they first start reading. Other than that, good job, I would continue reading if you wrote more.

Awww, that was really sweet. I'm glad you didn't do something to ruin the mood right at the end. Do please write more, I don't give a damn if it has clop or not, though that would be nice, what I really want to see is you exploring Luna and Shield's feelings for each other and him helping her deal with and get around the idea that most other ponies don't appreciate her night. And how Celestia reacts when she eventually finds out.

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Actually, the reason the next chapter is taking so long is because it's really two chapters. The reason I am waiting to release both at the same time is because one of the chapters actually doesn't have any clop whatsoever and is just exploring the characters. The chapter after it actually has quite a considerable amount of development as well, just ends on a sexual note.

Just trying to keep things interesting for those fans...

Thank you for your comments. I appreciate them more than anything else!