I simultaneously love and hate you. I love you for writing this story, and making me really like Darren with ever passing moment. But I hate you for making me love this story, and then having infrequent updates. Needless to say, do continue with your story.
Your comma's are on the wrong side. "This is what is happening", You might want to fix this "It's bothering me." "This is what you should do," Note the quotations? "I like this."
I simultaneously love and hate you.
I love you for writing this story, and making me really like Darren with ever passing moment.
But I hate you for making me love this story, and then having infrequent updates.
Needless to say, do continue with your story.
man i love this story, BUT PLZ i want to see more up dates!!!
Your comma's are on the wrong side.
"This is what is happening", You might want to fix this "It's bothering me."
"This is what you should do," Note the quotations? "I like this."
"Fight a goddess? OK!"
"No! Do not fight the Princesses!"
2258855 I'm just evil like that.
2259636 I've seen it taught and done both ways. So I'm just sticking with what I was taught. Thanks for the input though. Tis appreciated
Darren's head canon is the engineer to me.
Can't really decide on Zachary.
you get a dan outda dan! if you get that joke you sir are a winner. also this is going in my faveorites. and I believe in Harvey Dent.