All this course of actions seems pretty....stupid for Twilight. Kidnapping 2 powerful and heavily armed men without explanation and leaving one of them in an unknown location?
"Figured as much.", he said, "The purple one kept blabbing about some 'Wanderer' she stuck in her basement. Anyways lets continue. You! Why don't you tell us your name first." he said, as he pointed his gun at the orange one that had kicked him. Without flinching, she glared up at him and said, "Mah names Applejack."
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R.I.P Rainbow Dash.
All this course of actions seems pretty....stupid for Twilight. Kidnapping 2 powerful and heavily armed men without explanation and leaving one of them in an unknown location?
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Also do you have a proofreader for this?
aha! poor rainbow dash
Oh, my, this really made my day.
1483743 Um...... Glad to have made your day....... I think.....
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Dude, Twilight lost the right to do anything smart when she mutated the parasprites into sky-piranhas that abide by Asimov's laws of Robotics.
1489174 I guess that's why she will fail her test next season.
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And why she accidentally deleted the last 13 episodes of it.
Interesting, though longer chapters would be nice.
Rainbow Dash you dumb shit.
GODDAMNIT RAINBOW DASH YOU HAVE DESTROYED EVERYTHING WE HAVE WORKED FOR!