If you ask me, I don't like how that ended. It's hard to imagine two Fallout characters NOT using that little respite of the freezing spell to rip their opponents apart, even if figuratively speaking. The Wasteland teaches people how to fight to win at any cost, battle ethics being by far the most common victim.
1559151 My characters have always been a bit more charisma and intelligence oriented. They understand when it's time to fight and when they should probably stop to hear what someone has to say.
1559530 I could kinda tell., it seems as though you have a general idea of the story arc but nothing in between the beginning and the climax. Besides that this story is quite awesome
1559244 Kind of idealistic, the concept of not one, but two wastelanders (completely unrelated in-universe to boot) that will stop fighting without having the upper hand, especially by someone that is likely more likely to favor their enemies instead of them. But well, this is your story, and it's the only thing that rustled a jimmy. Therefore, I will say 'do go on' and continue lurking.
1563989 Sure it's idealistic. But that's just how they developed as I played through the game and then fleshed them out some more with just a little bit of head canon. Well, either way, I'm sorry to have rustled your jimmies. Good to have you lurking here.
I have to say, both the Wanderer and the Courier seem a little..... Underpowered. They're both legendary warriors who've toppled empires with no magic artifacts, no magic and, likely, not even a whole cadre of friends. Two men, ten guns and possibly several dead empires. These men, forged in strife, molded by war and death, equipped with powerful weapons and armor, each wearing a Pip-Boy (a potential game-changer in a fight) are being bested by..... A librarian, a farmer, a baker, a dressmaker, and two public servants.
Just by brute strength and fighting skill you'd expect the Wanderer to toss Pinkie and Applejack around like a ragdoll-- you'd expect someone who can survive being shot with a Gatling Laser or struck with a giant hammer to laugh off a buck to the (Power Armored) chest. The Courier is an even bigger case and should likely be able to laugh off Rainbow's punches
In addition, one would expect the two alien apes to slightly intimidate the group of ponies who cowered in fear of a zebra.
Not to mention that the first time Twilight used magic on either of them, they would be thinking "wow. She's a huge threat. I should hold her at gunpoint/ kill her/ knock her unconscious the first chance I get.
Heh. Kickass.
Have The Offspring.
I hope they don't just agree to help them, I sure wouldn't help someone who kidnaps me.
If you ask me, I don't like how that ended. It's hard to imagine two Fallout characters NOT using that little respite of the freezing spell to rip their opponents apart, even if figuratively speaking. The Wasteland teaches people how to fight to win at any cost, battle ethics being by far the most common victim.
1559151 My characters have always been a bit more charisma and intelligence oriented. They understand when it's time to fight and when they should probably stop to hear what someone has to say.
This is awesome... but rlly tho damn you and your short chapters!!!! so frustrating. i will like and favorite to show how pissed I am.
Also is this a story that you have planned out or is it more of a see how it plays out deal?
Speaking of which, what is this? I expect some embarrassed Pinkie's for this, HeavyMetalCommunist.
1560057Damn. Must fix.
EDIT: Fixed. And don't blame Heavy, he can't catch them all.
1559530 I could kinda tell., it seems as though you have a general idea of the story arc but nothing in between the beginning and the climax. Besides that this story is quite awesome
1560393 Fine ignore my compliment then
also, fixed
1562528 I accept your compliment good sir.
1562722 All I can say is thank you for not making this crossover FoE. Don't think I could handle any more of that
1559244 Kind of idealistic, the concept of not one, but two wastelanders (completely unrelated in-universe to boot) that will stop fighting without having the upper hand, especially by someone that is likely more likely to favor their enemies instead of them.
But well, this is your story, and it's the only thing that rustled a jimmy. Therefore, I will say 'do go on' and continue lurking.
1563989 Sure it's idealistic. But that's just how they developed as I played through the game and then fleshed them out some more with just a little bit of head canon. Well, either way, I'm sorry to have rustled your jimmies. Good to have you lurking here.
1565073 I said it was idealistic, not that it was wrong
Either way, it was but one single eeny weeny jimmie, and I know that
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as you just thought of a possibility I wouldn't write myself.
Happy to know you like my lurking
I have to say, both the Wanderer and the Courier seem a little..... Underpowered. They're both legendary warriors who've toppled empires with no magic artifacts, no magic and, likely, not even a whole cadre of friends. Two men, ten guns and possibly several dead empires. These men, forged in strife, molded by war and death, equipped with powerful weapons and armor, each wearing a Pip-Boy (a potential game-changer in a fight) are being bested by..... A librarian, a farmer, a baker, a dressmaker, and two public servants.
Just by brute strength and fighting skill you'd expect the Wanderer to toss Pinkie and Applejack around like a ragdoll-- you'd expect someone who can survive being shot with a Gatling Laser or struck with a giant hammer to laugh off a buck to the (Power Armored) chest. The Courier is an even bigger case and should likely be able to laugh off Rainbow's punches
In addition, one would expect the two alien apes to slightly intimidate the group of ponies who cowered in fear of a zebra.
Not to mention that the first time Twilight used magic on either of them, they would be thinking "wow. She's a huge threat. I should hold her at gunpoint/ kill her/ knock her unconscious the first chance I get.
You are welcome, it was a good read and I found your story very entertaining, well good luck on your next chapter.
call me a grammar nazi, but spell check wouldn't go amiss in this story.