This is gold, not enough good Vore here on fimfiction. Keep up the delicious work.

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thanks man, I plan to keep this going for a while.

Excellent work love it keep it up and can’t wait for your next chapter

Pretty nice chapter. There are a few errors and thing that need added. But it's good nonetheless. I'll quote the places that need fixing and bold the things that need fixing or added

The door to the restaurant opened and a white unicorn stallion in purple gold trimmed armor walked in. He spoke briefly to the hostess before heading toward Bonnie. His eyes widened at the sight and he quickly crossed his legs to hide an obvious sign of arousal at the sight of Bonnie Delight’s bulging belly and pony filled plot. He cleared his throat loudly.

“I’ll talk to her so don't worry one bit and leave it to Mama Bonnie.” Bonnie smiled cheerful and dropped the illusion on her belly, letting its bugling wriggling form visible for all to see in the corridor of Canterlot Castle, its gurgles muted moans now quite audible. Celestia smiled in response and led her onward to a dark blue door marked with a crescent moon. The princess raised a hoof and knocked on the door.

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“Our dearest sister tells us modern predators are not to dine as they wish upon prey ponies as they once did.” There was an obvious predatory edge to Luna’s voice, one Bonnie had heard and used herself during her younger, less civil years. “She also said you created spells that allow such ponies to reenact their sole purpose in life, is this true?”

Luna’s belly growled and she put her full weight atop Bonnie’s belly pinning her down. The unicorn squirmed under the younger diarch as she made herself comfortable.

“Will these two reform at your place of business little predator?” Luna kept her hungry eyes locked on Bonnie’s as she licked that cream colored belly. The ponies squirming more under the weight, their noises making their enjoyment obvious.

“Prey ponies now pay to get eaten at your place of business?” The night princess tilted her head in amazement.

“Thank you, your highness.” Bonnie sat up and her horn glowed with a matching one around her belly. The couple inside now mostly mush had begun being absorbed by Bonnie’s body her spell hurried the process along. Her flanks and plot swelled before the laughing Princess who smirked.

Bonnie nodded and got up to her feet as a guard escorted one of the stallion meals from her aforementioned eatery.

“One order of Oak Berry here to please.” The rather large and muscular earth pony bowed his head. His size rivaled even the famed Big Mac and his coat was a mellow brown with a hammer cutie mark.

“Glad to hear it your highness, now would you like me with one of our signature toppings or raw as we say.” Oak Berry asked while standing at attention.

“It was only two and spreading any rumors to the contrary carries a sentence of forty-eight hours on my flanks Miss Delight.” Celestia said mocking and sternly as she giggled. “Now I do hope this hasn’t interfered with your busy today too much.”

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Thank you for pointing these out they should be fixed now

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You're welcome

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Do you plan on any other types of Vore? CV/UB?

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Yes I do

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I will limit cv some as I prefer female/futa preds and While i enjoy cv I know a lot of readers don’f like futa stuff