She appeared as if from nowhere, a dark shadowed figure full of dread magic. Shining Armor and Cadance scowled with apprehension, but her attention was on the _other_ shadowy overlord that stood before her. Only one could remain.
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Changelings in the show were *really* not good at deception. Ponies are just even worse at seeing through it.
Good to see that Umbra is pointing out some of the flaws in how the ponies are acting. I wonder how Chrysalis is going to attack the empire in this timeline? I wonder if Umbra will stop her from grabbing Cadance, Shining Armor, and Flurry Heart? It would be interesting to see her plan fail and hopefully that she gets captured.
Yay, the author is back from the void of oblivion, from the depths of the outer space! Hurray!
Umbra provides shade
Shade gives content in return
Brave bug is well placed
OBTW where KoFi link?
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Right here cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/628249527920623636/961362784099115069/unknown.png
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Thanks kindly.
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Kevin comes to mind.
Well, that was definitely well handled. A lot better than in the show, to be honest. ...it says something about the show just how many of the problems have better resolutions as a result of "adulting".
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Kids television tends to not Adult through problems. A lot of adult entertainment fails to Adult problems, come to think. There are a lot of stories that would change a lot if everyone involved Adulted.
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To be fair, the writers gave everyone the Idiotball quite a lot.
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Exactly this.
At times it seems like lazy writing in some ways to move a plot forward where everyone suddenly gets an idiot ball. Something that I really like that your stories don't do.
Edit: obviously kids entertainment does have some limitations at time on this, but the really well done shows seem to mostly avoid it.
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Chrysalis was terrible at impersonating Cadence.
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Doomie impersonated Pinkie pretty well.
Thorax: "Everything looks clear..."
*A wild Pinkie Pie appears*
Thorax: "Not clear - NOT CLEAR!
Umbra should snuggel Thorax infront of Cadance.
Just for fun
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I look at Cobra Kai
Snuggle that bug, because bug need hug
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