She appeared as if from nowhere, a dark shadowed figure full of dread magic. Shining Armor and Cadance scowled with apprehension, but her attention was on the _other_ shadowy overlord that stood before her. Only one could remain.
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I think that you have very well portrayed Umbra's confusion in this chapter. Some kind of disastrous situation came out of nowhere, she wasn't prepared at all for the consequences, bumbled a little bit around and got back up afterward. Nice
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She can't always have the answers ready in a shadowy snack.
Good chapter, obviously a lead in to the next but good all the same. Umbra and Starlight had a nice little moment.
I've got to say, seeing someone who is more interesting and successful than I am making the same sorts of writing errors, really goes a long way to boost the old self-esteem.
And even if it didn't, no matter. I'm in here for the long haul.
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Well, now you made me curious. Which errors?
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Yup.
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Well, beside already provided recipe you really don't want to know what Japan put into ice-cream.
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Well, the one that immediately stands out in my head: "Umbra scaled the stares and began wandering the palace in search of Twilight."
Particularly since the correct word was used in the paragraph immediately before.
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Eee, fixed. Only reported typos can be properly neutralized.
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One of those facts all too easily forgotten, like how only you can prevent forest fires, or how McNuggets are 40% disloyal robots.
Did she just forgot she's a Crystal Bender?
I mean, it's strange for her not to attempt to use her most used talent.
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YOU EXPOSED THE TRUTHS OF THE UNIVERSE!! YOU MUST BE EXTERMINATED!!
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Joke's on you! My franchise doesn't allow crossovers!
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Possibly yes.
Taking a non-trivial amount of psychic damage that removes part of who you are seems as though it could be somewhat distracting.
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In her current state, I wouldn't trust myself to try and magically "moosh" the Heart back together. Might end up with a Crystal Glob, heh. Having taken hits of the Little Green Death (NyQuil) before, I know how it feels to be confused with your head full of cotton. I also admit I'm not Brony enough to recall how the episode originally played out having only watched it once when it first aired.
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Consider this gentle encouraging to do so. A lot of details are being missed by the dizzy one.
Pinkie's got it right!
I just realized. You haven't done Tirek and Starlight is here
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I was wondering how long before that was noticed.
I am surprised Crystal Wizard Umbra don't just repair the Crystal Heart. Mending it sound be simple...
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Before or after she was incapacitated?
Had they no emergancy protocol in place in case of the Crystal-Heart being stolen or in this case made unusable?
Flurryheart sonic attack was super effective, how did noone go deaf? Unless they fixed it via magically magic solution?
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Very good point... You got me there. Esys solution is out the window so to speak.