Page generated in 0.02 seconds
Total duration
765 users online
742,351 hits today, 2,782,760 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
just wanted to know from my, hopefully fans. if my way of writing is ok or am I going a bit too slow in the story's progression? I'm a fan of (don't you dare), witch is a faster pace story, but I do want to add some details. I noticed some thumbs down reviews and with this as my first story, I like some input.
>>DocBlackP
I like the story. spelling and grammar is pretty minor really. I will say that the perspective shifts combined with time jumps can be a bit hard to follow.
10977884
The only problem I could say is that the constant PoV is annoying.