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Ok that was delightfully ominous there at the end
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I liked what I did at the end too. Stay tuned for the next chapter.
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Yeah I will be, im just an impatient floof
Kind what to see what happen to the mare that was picking on blueblood
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You and I both... I do so appreciate a good blood eagle in the morning...
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Oh that will be something to watch for he said with a wolfish grin.
Noncombatants
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Thanks for that. some tend to slip past the cracks.
OK I have to say it these last 2 chapters are extremely jarring. I know that these two displaced's stories are meant to be interlinked some what heavily, and that it's a way of encouraging people to go check out stories they otherwise wouldn't but with the other story not being caught up to this one and the fact that others may not want to read the other story just to understand what is going on in this one I strongly recommend adding a short summery of what happened to the top of this chapter especially considering some thing obviously happened pertaining to Brexes understanding and perception of Celestia. Other than that I loved this chapter especially that bit near the end with the spider demons on the ceiling. XD