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I'd take this as a good thing! It means you're improving!
Take all the time you need
The new chapters 1 - 3 are interesting. Truthfully a slight improvement since previously I kept getting confused on the pacing during that time as it was a bit weird. Though I didn't mind the old one this is fine or might even be better when reading. Keep it up.
What was added in the re-made ones, was something I wanted to do back then but couldn't bring myself put down at the time with how nervous I was.
Thanks for the encouragements.
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I rewrote those and did some more editing. Tried to fix up the confusion with the time lapse also. So it's more or less the same aside from the chapter one In the beginning.
In the middle of chapter 4 right now and once that's done, I'll be going back to making more chapters.
I put down on those chapters fixed. At least now I can look at them and not cringe anymore. LOL.
Ok, that’s about all of the edits I’m going to do. Going to get back to work on new chapters. For those that put up with me, thanks for waiting.
I'm just imagining rainbow dash as white bread at this point. The rainboom ....... The rainboom is real!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This may seem like a rather abnormal question but I need a refresher can the dancer class actually learn flight