10943480 Oh I definitely do, but I try to keep myself calm. And this didn't bother me. Also just letting you know, this story was co written by me and my partner. he's known as The Lurker on this website
She frowned when she saw the author's name. That frown turned into growl. "...by a self righteous prick who wouldn't know talent if it fucked him in the skull!!" Twilight screamed in a sudden and out of character rage.
Starlight didn't need friendship lessons she just needed to lose the anxiety from what she did and losing her best friend. All twilight was doing was not seeing the actual problem. Anxiety kept her from making more friends after sunburst ditched her. Considering he was so sure that she would be disappointed that he never even bothered to see how she was doing Considering he left without even saying goodbye. It was get cutie mark and leave without ever really looking back.
She frowned when she saw the author's name. That frown turned into growl. "...by a self righteous prick who wouldn't know talent if it fucked him in the skull!!" Twilight screamed in a sudden and out of character rage.
Chanceliour (I doubt I spelled that correctly) Neighsay??
I'm mainly here for the story though, not the other bits.
I actually liked how powerful the Author made Twilight in the original, hopefully it's the same here. Although it was a bit confusing, 1 chapter it mentioned Twilight was taller than Luna and then a couple chapters later it said that Twilight was "finally" taller than Luna or more specifically the last time she seen her.
Alot of mistakes in the story, plus some grammar mistakes and some of the paragraphs were doubled for some reason.
I like the idea that Twilight basically reforms every villain, what they did with Chrysalis in the story was amazing, I actually wish there was more stories like these without all the sex and stuff.
A story where Twilight is OP, reforms every villain and becomes friends with everyone, just without the sex.
But I already know the Author isn't going to do that so I'll just hope someone else does.
Might want to watch those pretenses, you switch quite frequently here
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I like your profile pic.
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Thanks.
It’s my OC Sparkling Medley.
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I wanted to get this chapter out quickly
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I could tell.
Just a bit of friendly advice, we’d rather wait for a good chapter than a rushed chapter. Grammar wise or otherwise.
Awesome work love it keep it up
I see that it's finally here, the remake. Nice!!!
So, what's gonna be the changes in here? Or it will be the same thing, but with better grammar and everything improved?
this is really good so far
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Well the first big change is that Starlight is the first pet instead of Trixie
Pet play huh, well as long as it is mutual and the one acting like a pet is willing to do so I guess I’m okay with this.
its ok when it gets to same number of chapters as the old one i will coment on the last one
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Im glad you liked it
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Why would it annoy me?
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Oh I definitely do, but I try to keep myself calm. And this didn't bother me. Also just letting you know, this story was co written by me and my partner. he's known as The Lurker on this website
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It was funny. I laughed.
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No problem.
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*huggles*
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Go for it
I should help with this
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I would be very open to your help, Shade~!
So, was the author BlueBlood, or Neasay?
Starlight didn't need friendship lessons she just needed to lose the anxiety from what she did and losing her best friend. All twilight was doing was not seeing the actual problem. Anxiety kept her from making more friends after sunburst ditched her. Considering he was so sure that she would be disappointed that he never even bothered to see how she was doing Considering he left without even saying goodbye. It was get cutie mark and leave without ever really looking back.
are they reading Sonic doujins? Lol
Chanceliour (I doubt I spelled that correctly) Neighsay??
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Agreed.
I'm mainly here for the story though, not the other bits.
I actually liked how powerful the Author made Twilight in the original, hopefully it's the same here. Although it was a bit confusing, 1 chapter it mentioned Twilight was taller than Luna and then a couple chapters later it said that Twilight was "finally" taller than Luna or more specifically the last time she seen her.
Alot of mistakes in the story, plus some grammar mistakes and some of the paragraphs were doubled for some reason.
I like the idea that Twilight basically reforms every villain, what they did with Chrysalis in the story was amazing, I actually wish there was more stories like these without all the sex and stuff.
A story where Twilight is OP, reforms every villain and becomes friends with everyone, just without the sex.
But I already know the Author isn't going to do that so I'll just hope someone else does.