oh snap son

Dat last picture.

Dat seductive face

Yes, Rainbow. I am your slave.

You know. I liked this story when it kept the 'you' protagonist's gender ambiguous.
Well this chapter blew that ambiguity right out. And I am very disappointed for it. Unfortunately this is where my reading ends. Its still good, till this chapter.

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sucks to be you

SWAG

oh my

88569 indeed.

Rainbow can teach me things any day!
Things about... Life... And algebra. And... Bedroom sports. Yes.

Only thing I can think of now: media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lvw6fc8WTJ1r1386n.gif

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I see you have an adamant hate for straight sex?
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This was supposed to be a reply to 87434

Good job on writing a sex scene without decribing any physical part of it, and without seeming like you were trying to avoid it.

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Uh oh, he's in for it now!!!

86033 Dammit, I was gonna say that!

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Best comment ever.

112691

And... my interest was lost.

It is well written and engaging though. Nice job on that.

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Dat face....

boom wing boner. alwas expected around rainbow dash.

85621 that is a comment worthy of first.

Hell to the Yes

Sex in the third chapter?
There is only one other story I've seen do that.

112691 haha agreed

Even when Rainbow's on bottom, she's on top.

Wait. How do you grip with hooves?

659888 Mmmagic.

when i got done reading this chapter i sat in my chair like valkyr.com.au/community/attachments/awww-yeah-jpg.2955/

All I can say is:

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you said breaking wrong you said braking. just telling you the story's still great!

Hmm... I find this a bit lacking as to the actual storyline, such as the clop is just like, "I love you, lets buck," But it is good so far, other than that. (Just my two cents years after the story is complete. )

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Me: I hate you, let's buck, and I wish you were never born.