The new human professor at Canterlot University has caught the eye of the returned Night Princess, a friendship and some feelings blossoming. But, something seems off, as if he's hiding something from her. She intends to find out what.
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interesting.
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Ya I realized that when I started the second chapter.
I'm really enjoying this story I can't wait for the next chapter and it seems to be pretty accurate to history
Glad to see this update. Really enjoy this.
Im loving this so far, alot. You are very accurate to historical knowledge, however It would be nice if you left historical documents in the desc, I feel it'd be pretty useful for anyone wanting to learn more about the battles.
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Ask and you shall receive good sir! I'll leave it in the authors notes tomorrow for anyone who wishes to read it!
Just wanting to add that in your first chapter you should have had him remember a paper showing the Japanese ambassador to America giving us “Friendship medals” two weeks before the attack happened to show how surprising it was to the US for Japan to attack it should also be stated that 4 ships were sunk but only one of them (the “Arizona”) was unable to be raised and repaired meaning they only really destroyed 1 battleship and that the attack was a complete failure by what the Japanese objectives were.
This is anthro, right? No long horse necks?
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Yes, no long horse necks here.
Luna emptied her bowels? Her lower intestines? She shit herself?
10845301
Woops, wrong noun! Thank you for pointing that out; it should be fixed.
Pretty sure you meant isolated, not stranded.
I can easily say this story has caught my interest, well it's fairly well written, I like the use of the old lingo in the story. I am liking how James and Luna bounce off each other. I do have to appreciate that you aren't shying away from the ugly side of how both side could be in the war. I can;t wait to read more of this.