I'm loving the interactions. They're so comical, yet they still flow realistically.

I eagerly await more, and thank you for this chapter :).

wait, ain't cows fully sapient in ponyland? that's a horrible insult!

Thanks for the update!

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And a girl who actually read Dawkins and knows the proper definition of meme is a incredibly precious treasure.

I liked seeing Moondancer's academic side shine through in knowing the meaning of memes.

I'm unsure what the length of the next chapter will be, but I promise it will not take that long again. Editing this was a huge pain and even now I'll still see mistakes littered here and there.

I was unsure if it felt like it was dragging on or if conversations felt boring. Good to read that people enjoyed the banter

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I never see this brought up so I thought it would be interesting to explore. Moondancer is also sort of a know-it-all and explaining stuff is a way to easily distract her.

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Minoaturs are all about that swole life

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No wonder this took a while. 15k words

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Yeah, I could have split the chapter in parts after the breaking lines, but it felt better to read all in one go. What do you guys think?

I'm not surprised since ponies are kinda racist and its more ingrained in their culture than ours so the cow comment didn't really surprise me.

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Understandable
I mean we haven't seen the main human character yet so it was a good call

I fucking love it

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I was surprised at the length but it was a good read.

Also you really summed up a lot of blue collar work right here.

“And the fact that you can die is also a factor,” Minuette said.

“Eh. How would I know the difference? I’d be dead!” Twinkleshine laughed.

This is wonderful to read, I love the way you have them joke with each other, it comes off so goooood and natural!

*update*

"Nice, let's have a bit of light reading"

*15k words chapter*

"....alrigthy then"

Jokes aside it was an amazing chapter and I really love the interactions and the way you made the characters react to each other...really can't wait for more hehehe

Very nice!

Really fun chapter. Loved the dialogue and interactions, especially Twinkleshine and Minuette.

Can already see what Greg is going to be doing at Moondancer's home!
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This is a great story! The dialogue is very natural, and scene description is vivid. I can't wait to see where it goes

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Dialogue is always my favorite part to write so it's nice to know that others enjoy it!

“I don’t want to hear any bemoaning. C’mon, hop to it,” Vintage Brew stomped. He placed the club on the table and made to pull out Minuette. Twinkleshine pouted but did as her uncle demanded, placing the bags upon her back.

Lemon Hearts

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Fixed! Thanks for the heads up.

“Gotta go. See you girls later.” He closed the door behind him and then it was just once again just Moondancer and Lemon Hearts left to their own devices. Moondancer wouldn’t stand for any of that after her little interrogation at the pub.

Unnecessary words.

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It was still an enjoyable read, although I prefer small bites over large chunks. Makes it easier to digest and keep track of things.

The funny thing is, after the first two chapters, I totally forgot (if I ever twigged to it in the first place) that this was going to be HiE. Kinda out of left field.