Four friends wake up in the middle of an Equestrian forest, transformed into three ponies and a griffon. They will have to forge a path for themselves in a totally unfamiliar world.
i like the idea that maby luna is the one who got kicked out her body and nightmare is the one in it now but doesnt relise it. if anyone has seen a story like that can you send it to me i think i saw one a while ago but forgot
Interesting, so it looks like the thing that tainted the four foals might be remnant of Nightmare Moon and they might just be able to link the dotes together, hope fully. I wonder if they will starting being pidgin holed in their current tribes with the griffin getting roped into being acquainted with his 'heritage' and such. I wonder when, why and how Prince Blueblood is going to get involved in the story sense they aren't anywhere Canterlot sense there is a tag of him in the story?
10665802 with regards to Blueblood I do have a plan for him to be fairly majorly involved, it's just taking slightly longer to actually get to canterlot than I'd initially expected, Might need to remove him from the tags for the time being.
10666013 Well you could bring him to them in happenstance like at a important public event or that so state secret investigation that he is sent to look after personally.
Well, would you look at that, we finally got a chronology. Now things are getting more interesting.
The inconsistent (or just plain missing) capitalization of names and places in this story is driving me nuts.
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I'll make sure to try catch those for ch8. I'm sorry about the capitalisation errors.
i like the idea that maby luna is the one who got kicked out her body and nightmare is the one in it now but doesnt relise it. if anyone has seen a story like that can you send it to me i think i saw one a while ago but forgot
Interesting, so it looks like the thing that tainted the four foals might be remnant of Nightmare Moon and they might just be able to link the dotes together, hope fully. I wonder if they will starting being pidgin holed in their current tribes with the griffin getting roped into being acquainted with his 'heritage' and such. I wonder when, why and how Prince Blueblood is going to get involved in the story sense they aren't anywhere Canterlot sense there is a tag of him in the story?
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with regards to Blueblood I do have a plan for him to be fairly majorly involved, it's just taking slightly longer to actually get to canterlot than I'd initially expected, Might need to remove him from the tags for the time being.
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Well you could bring him to them in happenstance like at a important public event or that so state secret investigation that he is sent to look after personally.