Four friends wake up in the middle of an Equestrian forest, transformed into three ponies and a griffon. They will have to forge a path for themselves in a totally unfamiliar world.
Nice to see an update so soon, but I have to warn you I lose quickly interest in a story if it is updated to often, I just can't keep up with all the stories I follow. As for the chapter it was good, I hope they will make a full recover or at least have a fully functional prosthesis if they actually lose a limb. I wonder if the guards will also be part of the cast. At the moment seeing that they are four arriving in Equestria, and are now in contact with the native I think the lack of distinctive personalities between them might start to become a problem for the story if they don't each have their own unique personnel struggles to go thought because at the moment they all feel interchangeable at the moment. Still i do like the way you go into detail. Keep it up.
10633900 If I'm honest I did rush a little to get ch4 out, I've got university resuming tomorrow so I don't know what my schedule will be like, so updates will slow down.
As for the cast, I do plan to give them some breathing room now that they're out of the life or death situation in the forest. Some more calm slice of life stuff, adapting to equestria, learning about the place, introducing some side Characters in hoofington and such.
As for the guards I shan't spoil too much for them yet, as I do have plans for them.
Well, things has gotten interesting.
Nice to see an update so soon, but I have to warn you I lose quickly interest in a story if it is updated to often, I just can't keep up with all the stories I follow. As for the chapter it was good, I hope they will make a full recover or at least have a fully functional prosthesis if they actually lose a limb. I wonder if the guards will also be part of the cast. At the moment seeing that they are four arriving in Equestria, and are now in contact with the native I think the lack of distinctive personalities between them might start to become a problem for the story if they don't each have their own unique personnel struggles to go thought because at the moment they all feel interchangeable at the moment. Still i do like the way you go into detail. Keep it up.
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If I'm honest I did rush a little to get ch4 out, I've got university resuming tomorrow so I don't know what my schedule will be like, so updates will slow down.
As for the cast, I do plan to give them some breathing room now that they're out of the life or death situation in the forest. Some more calm slice of life stuff, adapting to equestria, learning about the place, introducing some side Characters in hoofington and such.
As for the guards I shan't spoil too much for them yet, as I do have plans for them.