The Zebra Empire once stood at the pinnacle of the world, but a Vengeful Sun burned the once great empire to the ground and all of it's allies. For several thousand years, the remnants of this tragedy crawled their way back.
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That moment between Zakia and the siri twins was so unexpected and hot. I'm surprised that they never got laid with Zakia.
You really are taking the time to get this right this time around. I remember in the original all of Sweet Apple Acres being just one chapter.
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If this goes the same way the original did with him than probably.
(Sate, Sate, Sate)
(Let's see, let's see. Let's see)
A new chapter, therefore a new message for you.
This new chapter brought us a "drug" or potion, which I must say has a certain resemblance to the drug that Cadence makes to take Shining Armor to shrink her penis. Only apparently this drug contains a lot of things.
From making the muscles denser and stronger, relatively compared to its previous consumption.
For a moment I had the vague idea that Zecora had possibly made the potion based on the Poison-Joke, since it may well be altered to make it change certain attributes of the body of whoever is touched by this herb.
This perhaps makes me think about the future uses that it could have and the importance that it even seems to have in the not too distant future of history. Which I like. Imagine the possibilities.
Moving on to the sex scene, a fresh touch of the Femboy and Zakai, which makes it clear that he has no problem fucking anyone (In the double sense of the sentence)
This particular scene reminded me of many other fic's where they make Big Mac a Big-fem-boy. But I like this, especially when it comes to our protagonist Zakai.
It is worth mentioning to others, that I would like to know what else he has planned, to know what actions he will take when he arrives in Canterlot, what he will do with the aristocrats and the politically powerful speaking of course. Look like Fleur, Fancy Pants, Hosty, Blueblood ... Mainly Blueblood.
Maybe I say this for a special request, but I would like to see in the future, that you will use Blueblood as a traitor who wants to help the zebras, perhaps with the promise of receiving power once the zebras dominate Equestria.
That and maybe see some Prince Blueblood action with some girls or zebras.
Anyway.
The chapter was very interesting, especially about the potion they made. Which puts me on the lookout for what other potions might make. Perhaps one that increases Zakai's virility, or even provides some muscle enhancement, contrary to the potion they made to use Big Mac as a guinea pig.
All this said.
I will be anxious to read the next chapter my good friend.
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The potion will be expanded on world building wise in coming chapters among other things. So you can expect some details regarding it.
Expect alot more to come with femboi's as they are gonna play a role and have a deeper meaning than getting someones dick wet. So look forward to that.
Dont worry about all this, all three are going to play a role as for what those roles are. I wont say but its well planned out and will set up a great many things.
Just keep reading and you'll find out soon enough.
Glad you enjoyed it,
-“You two have earned your rewards.”-
I bet he'll turn them into futas.
A little curiosity. What do you think it will happen if Zakia mates with a pregnant mare? Do you think he will be able to magically change the unborn pony child into a zebra? Will both mother and child be under Zakia's influence? Or do you think he will just cause a miscarriage?