The Zebra Empire once stood at the pinnacle of the world, but a Vengeful Sun burned the once great empire to the ground and all of it's allies. For several thousand years, the remnants of this tragedy crawled their way back.
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Can’t wait to see Applejack and Applebloom broken by Zakia.
I'm sorry if I don't comment before, I don't usually read lately, and that I have you as my favorite author.
Well, from what I have read, the scoop on this fic is certainly fresh, something new, although not so much for Zabradom, but there is certainly context and we have been explained why all this, which gives a point to favor to this story.
Our protagonist Zakai (I like the name) turns out to be a great Zebra stallion who actually has two limbs, wow, that certainly gives him a chance to do a 1 v 2. which he has already done XD
The progress of the story is slow but very, consistent like many of your works, certainly this story caught my attention in many ways. The previous chapter is currently my favorite, but that may change as we continue reading more of this great fic.
I must say that in a sexualized Equestria and that this does not stop being a Fanfic and that it is only fantasy, I give it a 10/10 I do not understand how the stupid who give Dislike do not even bother to say why, after Everything, the comments, good or bad always serve so that a writer can improve in the long term.
Lastly, I would like to make a request, although I know that you do this more for money, so that you can survive, I do not have the facility to be able to help monetarily. But I want you to know that I admire his work and I am certainly a fan of it.
Continuing with the request, I would like to see Zakai at a certain point that he feels dissatisfied with himself, either because he feels that he needs more size in his already huge members or perhaps increase the thickness of him . In any case it would be all bro.
A hug and I hope to read the next chapter very soon, I'm really excited to see the next chapter.
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~Yeah. Tried to set up a world that stood out but wasn't bland and unexplored in whats going on. More will be shown to further give life to the world and show a great many things that put a lot of actions that happen into better context.
~Glad you have enjoyed it so far. Hope you can keep enjoying it with the future updates! :D
~It's for several reasons I've seen.
1. OC Zebra Dom is often shit on. Where if it was Zecora instead of Zakia lead, many of those dislikes am sure wouldn't be their. People dont like OC's in darker stuff most the time.
2. The content is often very heavily disliked. How often do you see darker smut stories do you see in featured? Not many.
3. Many will dislike just based on the tags alone, they wont read it or anything. They see something at face value that they don't like and they dislike.
4. It's not a quick one, which is often easier to digest. I mean look at https://www.fimfiction.net/story/482273/drinks-debauchery that involves Zakia, cheating and mind break and you can see how much differently it was accepted and favored. People like more bite sized content.
5. Some people are just here for the fap/slap
6. Some are upset with the total reboot with all the changes and improvements and don't like the original is gone and wont share the original that was much rougher and far more smut driven.
~Just keep reading. :3
~Once again, glad to hear you are enjoying the chapter so much.
Sexy read as always. Will there still be Sissified Big-Mac in this rewrite?
What's going to happen when you get the pinky it's easy to quit running because of Fluttershy what about Pinky
Will we see Spike getting some action with the Zebras males?
Those Siri mares are more dangerous than I thought. I just hope that Big Mac will resist and maybe he will manage to break them.