Starlight learns to let go of her stress. Trixie finds a new way to process her emotions. Maud reveals why she always wears a frock. Ellie says trans rights, and not just with her mouth. F/F/F/F Pony/Pony/Pony/Human with sweetness and character.
"Ellie did a quick check, rubbing the tip of her thumb against the nails of her first two fingers. Flat enough."
I'm ashamed of how I never thought of that before, despite how obvious it now seems. Luckily there was never an occasion where someone could suffer from my non-flat nails. :D
She was insensate to anything in the world but her own pleasure. But this time she was also orgasming.
Ellie found this hilarious, if a bit flat in terms of characterization.
Oh my God, what a perfect set of sentences.
Alright, I'm just gonna say this now, even though there are a couple chapters left to go. I'm really not for these type of fics usually. HiE has been done so many times, especially Human x Pony, and most of those times are bad. The human being a woman is rare, so I usually give it a shot, just for the novelty. Additionally, I am very, very hardcore monogamous. I have nothing against polyamory, or threesomes, or anything like that. It's just not... up my alley. (Pun intended.)
But with all that in mind, I just love how you've written this so far. So much caring and tenderness. The action is great and varied, with correct, realistic anatomy and actions. It's hot and sweet at the same time—my favorite combo. Excellent work.
I am so so glad you appreciated it because that is my favorite line out of all the lines I've ever written, which makes the distance between how much I love it and how little I can show it to anyone I know just unbearably agonizing. Can die happy now!
Alright, I'm just gonna say this now, even though there are a couple chapters left to go. I'm really not for these type of fics usually. HiE has been done so many times, especially Human x Pony, and most of those times are bad. The human being a woman is rare, so I usually give it a shot, just for the novelty.
Yeah, this whole series in general is very particular to me, and the stories like this that I intend to write for it are very, very particular to me, so when I first saw you say you were going to start reading this, a small part of me actually panicked and tried to convince me to pull it before it was too late! Really glad I did not, though.
But yes! I came to this site looking for basically this story and did not find it. What I did find was, as you call it, most of the time bad. So, y'know. When you don't see something being done right, gotta do it yourself.
Additionally, I am very, very hardcore monogamous. I have nothing against polyamory, or threesomes, or anything like that. It's just not... up my alley. (Pun intended.)
Though the fact that I did not go ahead and make this version of Equestria a poly paradise at the same time as I made it good for so many nice things is probably the clearest sign that I'm not poly either, at least not in the way my poly friends are poly. In the canon present this story takes place in, Ellie is currently in the beginning of a monogamous relationship with a certain fashion horse. Though she finds a lot of her friends attractive, she does not, in fact, go around propositioning them despite the bad decisions department of her brain constantly encouraging her to.
But with all that in mind, I just love how you've written this so far. So much caring and tenderness. The action is great and varied, with correct, realistic anatomy and actions. It's hot and sweet at the same time—my favorite combo. Excellent work.
Thank you thank you thank you! That is exactly the combo I was going for, caring and tenderness and hotness. I was resigned to continue to throw chapters out into the void and watching the downvotes accumulate, so I've genuinely been giddy all day that you appreciate and understand what I am trying to do.
"Ellie did a quick check, rubbing the tip of her thumb against the nails of her first two fingers. Flat enough."
I'm ashamed of how I never thought of that before, despite how obvious it now seems. Luckily there was never an occasion where someone could suffer from my non-flat nails. :D
Oh my God, what a perfect set of sentences.
Alright, I'm just gonna say this now, even though there are a couple chapters left to go. I'm really not for these type of fics usually. HiE has been done so many times, especially Human x Pony, and most of those times are bad. The human being a woman is rare, so I usually give it a shot, just for the novelty. Additionally, I am very, very hardcore monogamous. I have nothing against polyamory, or threesomes, or anything like that. It's just not... up my alley. (Pun intended.)
But with all that in mind, I just love how you've written this so far. So much caring and tenderness. The action is great and varied, with correct, realistic anatomy and actions. It's hot and sweet at the same time—my favorite combo. Excellent work.
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I am so so glad you appreciated it because that is my favorite line out of all the lines I've ever written, which makes the distance between how much I love it and how little I can show it to anyone I know just unbearably agonizing. Can die happy now!
Yeah, this whole series in general is very particular to me, and the stories like this that I intend to write for it are very, very particular to me, so when I first saw you say you were going to start reading this, a small part of me actually panicked and tried to convince me to pull it before it was too late! Really glad I did not, though.
But yes! I came to this site looking for basically this story and did not find it. What I did find was, as you call it, most of the time bad. So, y'know. When you don't see something being done right, gotta do it yourself.
Though the fact that I did not go ahead and make this version of Equestria a poly paradise at the same time as I made it good for so many nice things is probably the clearest sign that I'm not poly either, at least not in the way my poly friends are poly. In the canon present this story takes place in, Ellie is currently in the beginning of a monogamous relationship with a certain fashion horse. Though she finds a lot of her friends attractive, she does not, in fact, go around propositioning them despite the bad decisions department of her brain constantly encouraging her to.
Thank you thank you thank you! That is exactly the combo I was going for, caring and tenderness and hotness. I was resigned to continue to throw chapters out into the void and watching the downvotes accumulate, so I've genuinely been giddy all day that you appreciate and understand what I am trying to do.