I loved the whole deal with her leaving composed and then skipping down the street when he looked out the window. That's just SO Rarity. It was especially reminiscent of her portrayal of a trip to the Gala with Blueblood giving her the ring and all that. Nice job capturing her character so far.
so he plans to skip town, then after a talk with Rares, he is going to the spa? this makes me feel and but overall, good job capturing her personality without making her look like a whore (pardon my word choice) very good job
I can see you use the lovly term that everyone likes to use on this site. Oh and I like how rarity spotted that out...didn't know about it but it was nice that Rarity did.
Of all the shops in all of Ponyville, of all the towns in all of Equestria, you just had to walk into the only place where you’d be recognized, and talk to the one pony who‘d recognize you in a heartbeat.
Why do I smell Casablanca here?
P.S. Spelling errors in bold, might want to fix the other uses as well.
I loved the whole deal with her leaving composed and then skipping down the street when he looked out the window. That's just SO Rarity. It was especially reminiscent of her portrayal of a trip to the Gala with Blueblood giving her the ring and all that. Nice job capturing her character so far.
XD Yeah, that's Rares. To quote Singing in the Rain...
"Dignity... Always Dignity..."
XD
so he plans to skip town, then after a talk with Rares, he is going to the spa? this makes me feel and
but overall, good job capturing her personality without making her look like a whore (pardon my word choice)
very good job
I'm surprized to see this story's chapters don't have many comments. It's brilliant.
I can see you use the lovly term that everyone likes to use on this site. Oh and I like how rarity spotted that out...didn't know about it but it was nice that Rarity did.
Of course "I've" made a stupid mistake staying here!!! Just thinking that is enough!!! It's the same as if "I" said "what could possibly go wrong"!!
Why do I smell Casablanca here?
P.S. Spelling errors in bold, might want to fix the other uses as well.
A nice Rarity is a cute Rarity.
that was sooooo rarity, great portrayal