Lacy, a human from Earth wakes up in Equestria. Luckily ponies are welcoming and helpful and tries their best to get him home but that takes time. Worse thing is that he's not completely himself. And the difference in culture can also cause problems.
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Thanks again T-G for another awesome chapter. Love all the dialog between Twi and Lacy and hope we see more of the flashbacks/talks between the two. Good luck with your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
Not a bad story, but its definitely one of the story concepts I don't care for much. The story type where is one third set in the present, and two thirds story in flashback. These are almost impossible to do right because the author inevitably spends so much time getting the flashback, story line, right, that, "Present Time, Time Line" aspect of the story is just unimaginative filler.
Im not saying that it cant be done well, what Im saying is that it takes an incredibly, incredible good writer to pull it off properly.
I'll continue to give this a fair shot, but if this continues to bounce from present time to flashback and back again, I probably won't finish it.
Again, not a bad story, just a style I don't care for.
The Monk
“Hundreds of years,” Reflection muttered, enjoying the scratching. “That’s a lot of porn.” - Dropbear
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Well, it’s completely okay, everyone has their own tastes in stories and I’m happy that you still giving this one a chance despite not being your style, though don’t worry, I never planned to keep up that flashback rate (after all I’m just an average writer at best )
I hope you’ll enjoy the rest of the story and the future chapters if you decide to stay.
I don't think anyone cares about the mc's past