Lacy, a human from Earth wakes up in Equestria. Luckily ponies are welcoming and helpful and tries their best to get him home but that takes time. Worse thing is that he's not completely himself. And the difference in culture can also cause problems.
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Easy for them to be angry at Lazlo, but none of them know his pain. He'll never see those he cares about again, he'll never see or live in his home again, and he'll never get to pursue the life he envisioned for himself again. They can never know his pain, but they'll blame him for feeling it, and that will destroy what was already a rather fragile relationship. I wouldn't be surprised if Lazlo insists on being sent to Griffin stone or some other country to get away from all of them.
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Well I agree with you on that I hope they realize it and hope they won’t be angry with him
Spike: Sorry Twiliight I know this whole DIscord thing and him messing with reality is important to you, but I better clean the library, since that is more important. This isn't anything worse than helping you with something small and insignificant after all.
Seriously though does he say that in the actual episode? If so. Holy fuck!
of course Discord would get a kick out of logical paradoxes.
This line makes this chapter feel like a rough draft.
Discord: Take this MacGuffin Deus ex machina with you.
Lacy: Prove it to me you can.
Discord: Of course! Wait our deal is actually done and instead of writing it in a way that is smooth and doesn't come across as cringe I will just say yes I will then point out you can go. It's how I roll after all
Yeah that part could have been written better, since I doubt it was deliberate to fit with Discord's character.
To be honest when first reading it a part of me wanted to stop, but I decided to give it a fair shake and by the end it wasn't as bad as I feared. I still feel this whole Discord thing should have happened after this whole depression mini arc. Thankfully the one thing I fear might happen didn't, the corrupted elements actually ruining the small progress they made, as it would cheapen such an idea, since it wasn't truly them. Will we get answers to what the fuck happened to Lacy? I doubt it was the element or it would be contradicted later with Sunset taking it into the human world, assuming that happens down the road. I don't quite like how it seems like it's going to be him, through his decision, that is going to lead to them ruining the small progress they made. Sure, they might do it in their anger, but it was caused by what he did and not them messing up completely on their own, which is what I wanted. In short Discord should have happened after his depression arc and his tough decision should have been after he seems to have gotten over it, with his choice being the ultimate test after all that. That would have made it more impactful, as after they managed through trial and error to make up with him and he finally reached acceptance, or it seems like it, Bam tough decision. It would make their frustration more understandable, as they seemed to finally reached a breakthrough only to crash and get knocked back by a brick wall.
Thank you.
Now i need more to be more happy.
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I think in this case they wouldn't think about his pain much, it's more of what they see, that he's about to leave them all in pain.
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True, but my point stands. He was given the chance to go home and it was what he wanted more than anything. Yeah, it was wrong in a moral sense, but as we all know from seeing the world around us everyday, humans are not the most moral of creatures, and some of us have some rather unconventional morals compared to others. I get the idea that the princesses will have a better understanding of this, and while they will probably still punish him in some regard, it will take what happened in the overall into consideration.
As for what happened with his hand? I think the element resisted him taking it into his own world, either because it didn't want to be separated from the other five or our world is so disharmonious that it would've destroyed the element once it got here.
If I were offered a way home to earth from a reliable source, I'd take it. And even if it means I have to kill every single living creature in Equestria to do so... Then so be it.
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You mean they are unaware of it, despite trying to cheer him up and get him to accept he couldn't return? It's fine and reasonable if they understand the tough decision on his part but is angry he would have thrown them until the bus with his selfish, yet understandable decision. A great question to ponder is, if they were in Lacy's shoes or horseshoe (I will see myself out for that bad pun) would they have attempted the same thing? All I am saying is I hope there is going to be some understanding next chapter instead of Lacy being painted as 100% in the wrong.
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I would like to see understanding too, but I fear that all six of them will have a rather black and white view on the matter.
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Oops meant to respond to the author's latest comment instead. One downside of being on a tablet. Oh well he will still see it. But yeah they most likely will, but here's hoping Lacy makes them or at least make a good case that this is more complicated and unless they can honestly say they wouldn't do the same if they were in his position they can't complain. Well they can but would only be complete hypocrites.
Sorry, I didn't have time to react earlier, it was morning and I had to go to work but here it is.
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Yeah, Spike did say that, I took that from the actual episode but cut him some slacks, he's just a kid after all.
Discord isn't the only one, there are also parents and grandparents, who love to use it when younger people come up with an example that goes against their argument.
Thanks for this big feedback, I'm glad that you liked it somewhat after all (or at least that's what I read out of your comment).
Actually, the answer to what happened is already in the story somewhat but there will be explanations.
There won't be Equestria Girls in this story so no Sunset, no human mirror world.
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You will see it in the next chapter.
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Then I aim to bring you happiness.
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An understandable viewpoint.
No excuse. Kid or not he should know better. Especially when he is shown to just as developed as the girls. If the writers wanted to only used him for the failed attempt they could have used a better way to get him away from the plot that doesn't make him an idiot that treats a threat to reality itself as only a minor problem his friends are having.
I was mainly talking about how his chaotic nature makes him love paradoxes in general.
Wouldn't say like. More like tolerate how it was used and overall it's meh. I still stand by every statement I made about it, but you didn't completely ruin this arc or story for me.
I support that actually since it would only lead to annoying confusion. Next time I hope you actually finish whatever character arc you go through in the future before moving on to the next and get those two mixed up with one another.
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Still, I'm happy that you didn't give up on this story, and I'm glad for your feedback.
Yeah, plus I didn't come up with any normal idea for Equestria Girls, only wrote some shitty ideas, while being somewhat drunk...
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To be frank that could still happen depending on how you handle the aftermath with the girls and lacy, but we will see.
I have been following this story for a while now, probably from the start to be honest, but I'm usually the silent type who only reads stories and doesn't comment all that much, so I'm glad to see it doesn't end like the previous chapter may have indicated.
Jót mosolyogtam azon a részen, amikor Laci kiakadt, kíváncsi vagyok mit gondolnak majd a lányok ezek után... :D - végre magyarul írhattam itt, soha nem gondoltam volna.
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I'm the same on that, 99% of my comments are reactions to the comments on my story. Anyway, I'm glad you like it and hope you will continue to enjoy reading this fanfic.
Én sem gondoltam, hogy magyarul írhatok ide, remélem ez azért még belefér itt. Őszintén szólva nem gondoltam hogy magyarok is olvassák ezt a sztorit. A reakció meg majd kiderül a folytatásból, aminek a nagy része már megvan.
Discord was surprised the portal didn’t work? That’s very interesting…