Lacy, a human from Earth wakes up in Equestria. Luckily ponies are welcoming and helpful and tries their best to get him home but that takes time. Worse thing is that he's not completely himself. And the difference in culture can also cause problems.
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Um. She still thinks he's trouble but wants to start anew. You don't see how those two contradict each other. At the very least it's a slap in the face. I still think you're trouble, but let's start over. She can't have it both ways and Lacy is an idiot for accepting it without calling her out on it.
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And judging him based on a few facts without the whole story wasn't very nice. Applejack is very stubborn about admitting that she was wrong and takes the lesson to heart. Considering the disasters she caused because she couldn't handle the farm by herself she only gave in when she had no choice. She hated to listen to Buffalo about their home.
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I get your point, but I plan to bring back this conflict, hopefully with a little better writing... (and of course bs-ing to explain what happened here )
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Thank you!
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I am in support of that actually. I mean their feud came seemingly out of nowhere and seeing it get quickly resolved made it kind of pointless. My hope is you have Lacy and her actually come to some agreement on their own, instead of having Twilight do it behind the scenes. Also properly call Applejack out on her foolish stubborn behavior.
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Yeah, I get your point. However, it won't come up in the next chapter probably because that will focus on another thing. I also plan to change the PoW sometimes, because I can see, that this won't work only in Lacy's perspective in the long run.
There's something called paragraph use it, dumbass
There was a radical change in Applejack here but absolutely no explanation for it. Twilight said she’s had several talks with Applejack. What about this conversation affected her so drastically? And why did MC agree to tell the story when he was so adamant about not telling it before? No one provided any compelling argument to change this policy.
This is a pretty good conclusion for MC regarding the dimensional problem.