The fanfic is ok the only disappointing part is the lack of reaction luna give i mean come on have u seen krampus he is nightmare fuel but im happy someone doing a horror displace fanfic u don't get a lot of horror displace fanfic

There is already a storie with this title.

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Well I figured Luna's seen worse in nightmares, and no one actually knows how long she's been fighting nightmares and if she can defeat them in the dream realm then she'd have no problem defeating one in the real world

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Then the name shall be changed my good sir

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Ok i see your point thx for the explanation 😋

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The name has been changed, hopefully it is a better title

I didn't mind the name i was just informing but since you took your time to change it, thank you my good sir.

This shows promise. I like it

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Hopefully I don't disappoint I plan to be four chapters in before I make it available for crossovers, if anyone wants to crossover with it

This seems pretty good

looks like a good read.

Now this is interesting because I was thinking of doing something similar, but with one of the old gods from H.P Lovecraft's stories. Also Krampus has always been a being that I've loved the idea of because it's much more likely to straighten out naughty kids than just saying that they'll get coal.

But what will you do, Krampus, when faced with something even you can't understand...?

Nicely done.

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Depends on if you need something, or if you want to help others.

`talk with thine sister` should be talk with Mine sister.

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Will fix it, old english is very hard to understand and write

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I, can tell naughty from nice, blizzards are my harald and shadow, the toys are my army. So ask yourself...is being bad really a good way to face me...rahahahaha

A few corrections are needed, specifically when Luna is referring to herself with Thy.