10424620 Don't worry about being as good as me, I'm still learning, and I just write what comes to my mind and focus my imagination into creating the scene but I can never write it as well as my imagination puts it all I can do is try. That's all any of us can do is try and sooner or later we get better at what were trying
The fight scene really fit the theme of who Krampus is pretty well. No punches thrown despite Krampus' strength, just a lot of holiday themed attacks.
There was an oddly high amount of stuffing dudes in sacks, though. Gave me serious Bloodborne flashbacks. Where are you taking those guys, Krampy? Yahar'gul?
"Nopony would ever do such evil, this is the work of Grogar if I had to hazard a guess."
If it was Grogar, they would be alredy dead
" Celestia fell victim to the shadows, and fell into darkness didn't she? " I asked knowing the answer.
Oh don't try to sell that and scapegoat the magic. She obviously was racist before with "all ponies are good and can't be evil but not other races" and become even more after Sombra
This was a massive improvement. The multiple points of view helped with exposition and context so that is amazing. The extra detail is always good. I liked the fight scene and how it worked off of the original krampus format of this slow unstoppable force and it's minions. The only complaint I have is that there are some double words and some grammar errors but that's just part of getting better at writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
10425157 I think they're referring to the extended canon continuity of G4 itself. One of the books (yes, there are gen 4 chapter books) has Cadance tell Twilight her life story and she specifically mentions that she was born a pegasus, and she ascended to alicornhood after reversing a love stealing spell that had been cast by Prismia, a pony enchantress. Another book confirms this as it reiterates that she was a pegasus as a young filly.
Nothing wrong with your version of things, as you already have made this a significant AU.
10426597 Ahhh ok, that clears things up though I do wish I had kept with a little bit of the original timeline, oh well, next chapter we should see the return of Daybreaker and thus the continuity of the show should stay the same, I don't plan on changing much just adding Krampus in and spicing it up so to say
Nice
Bravo my good man a truly wonderful chapter. Cant wait to see what happens next
This is so good! I wish I could write like you can. Keep up the great work!
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Don't worry about being as good as me, I'm still learning, and I just write what comes to my mind and focus my imagination into creating the scene but I can never write it as well as my imagination puts it all I can do is try. That's all any of us can do is try and sooner or later we get better at what were trying
I love the concept that Krampus can turn ponies into toys
The fight scene really fit the theme of who Krampus is pretty well. No punches thrown despite Krampus' strength, just a lot of holiday themed attacks.
There was an oddly high amount of stuffing dudes in sacks, though. Gave me serious Bloodborne flashbacks. Where are you taking those guys, Krampy? Yahar'gul?
If it was Grogar, they would be alredy dead
Oh don't try to sell that and scapegoat the magic.
She obviously was racist before with "all ponies are good and can't be evil but not other races" and become even more after Sombra
This was an excellent chapter with a well chosen song. Keep up the good work, my friend!
i enjoyed this chapter
Excellent work and a I like filly cadence She so cute is she Pegasus before she became a Alicorn
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No she's a unicorn, I thought I put that in the chapter but I could be wrong
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Not a sack his wicker basket, and maybe I'll start next chapter with where he takes them
This was a massive improvement. The multiple points of view helped with exposition and context so that is amazing. The extra detail is always good. I liked the fight scene and how it worked off of the original krampus format of this slow unstoppable force and it's minions. The only complaint I have is that there are some double words and some grammar errors but that's just part of getting better at writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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I think they're referring to the extended canon continuity of G4 itself. One of the books (yes, there are gen 4 chapter books) has Cadance tell Twilight her life story and she specifically mentions that she was born a pegasus, and she ascended to alicornhood after reversing a love stealing spell that had been cast by Prismia, a pony enchantress. Another book confirms this as it reiterates that she was a pegasus as a young filly.
Nothing wrong with your version of things, as you already have made this a significant AU.
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Ahhh ok, that clears things up though I do wish I had kept with a little bit of the original timeline, oh well, next chapter we should see the return of Daybreaker and thus the continuity of the show should stay the same, I don't plan on changing much just adding Krampus in and spicing it up so to say
I love it, its great and I want more. But please fix the title, its a possessive so it should be harmony's shadow.
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Well, usually racism and dark magic influence doesn’t bode well with each other.
I think we know where this is going.
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Where's it going