Column was snapped out of his nap by the sounds of screaming from the basement. It was high pitched and clearly pained. Snatch was tormenting the toy again. Shrugging, Column lay back down on the couch and drifted to sleep to the sounds of his slave’s misery.
Remember to record it for the slave to listen to as a lullaby.
I know this is not the way you want to do this story. However, there are two ways that Fluttershy could be found. One way is the deus ex machina card AKA Discord. The other way is the animals. You can't tell me that Fluttershy doesn't have enough predators as well as aviators that can pick up her scent. If it's been a long time since she's been found twilight could basically put a spell on the animals enhancing their senses so she would be found. You can't tell me that the house that she's being kept in is 100% scent free. Something with drift on the air and would make it easier for her to be found. I'm just saying.
11125288 That’s certainly true. She isn’t exactly well taken care of and realistically will probably die pretty young. That’s years out though, and she still has plenty of this left in her future.
11125294 You are right that I won’t be taking it that way, but you do bring up an interesting option. If I were to ever have her rescued (this is purely hypothetical of course, she’s not going anywhere,) I would have it be using her connection to animals.
11187926 No clue when, but yes. This is a story I write when I am having troubles with writer’s block and just for shits and giggles. So, it’s new chapters will arrive with no real pattern.
11212474 i know its still early since this stories still goin but do you have any plans for a sequel? like grab another element and break them two while makin fluttershy betray her friend and help? >:3
11244472 my favorite for stuff like this is fluttershy, shes the perfect victim, but next to her is a toss up between rarity and dashie. their both pretty selfish(ironic given one is supposed to be generosity lol) and egotistical and full of pride so its always great to see them broken and put in their place >:3 since fluttershy would be helping rarity might be the better choice imo since fluttershy had a closer bond with her then the others so it would make the betrayal more impactful
Remember to record it for the slave to listen to as a lullaby.
rip fluttershy
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I mean, she isn’t dead. Maybe a bit on the inside, but still.
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Maybe not yet, but somehow I doubt someone in her position is gonna live long into her senior years.
I know this is not the way you want to do this story. However, there are two ways that Fluttershy could be found. One way is the deus ex machina card AKA Discord. The other way is the animals. You can't tell me that Fluttershy doesn't have enough predators as well as aviators that can pick up her scent. If it's been a long time since she's been found twilight could basically put a spell on the animals enhancing their senses so she would be found. You can't tell me that the house that she's being kept in is 100% scent free. Something with drift on the air and would make it easier for her to be found. I'm just saying.
Yay, an update!
11125288
That’s certainly true. She isn’t exactly well taken care of and realistically will probably die pretty young. That’s years out though, and she still has plenty of this left in her future.
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Glad I could provide
11125294
You are right that I won’t be taking it that way, but you do bring up an interesting option. If I were to ever have her rescued (this is purely hypothetical of course, she’s not going anywhere,) I would have it be using her connection to animals.
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No need. She will be reliving this ordeal in her nightmares.
An update! I loved this chapter! Though Fluttershy didn't. Oh ponyfeathers. How could I have forgotten to track this?
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It’s even better that she didn’t though
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Yeah.
Next chapter!?
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No clue when, but yes. This is a story I write when I am having troubles with writer’s block and just for shits and giggles. So, it’s new chapters will arrive with no real pattern.
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i feel bad cause now youre makin me wish youd get writers block so i can get more of her suffering and eventual fall all the sooner T.T
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No need to feel guilty. Fluttersuffering is good enough to be worth it lol.
11212474
i know its still early since this stories still goin but do you have any plans for a sequel? like grab another element and break them two while makin fluttershy betray her friend and help? >:3
11212634
That does sound fun. No plans for that atm, but that could happen at some point.
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Have a preferred Element to see in that situation?
11244472
my favorite for stuff like this is fluttershy, shes the perfect victim, but next to her is a toss up between rarity and dashie. their both pretty selfish(ironic given one is supposed to be generosity lol) and egotistical and full of pride so its always great to see them broken and put in their place >:3 since fluttershy would be helping rarity might be the better choice imo since fluttershy had a closer bond with her then the others so it would make the betrayal more impactful