Wooo... I certainly like where this is going. Can't wait for the rest!

Mm, that's the stuff.

I can't wait to see how this goes... Fluttershy really is the perfect mare for the job (unless Discord hears of it, that is).

Also:

On of her hooves connected with Column’s chest though

I hope she gets Stockholm syndrome and become an obedient servant wife.

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Join in the fun.

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Corrected. Thanks for pointing that out.

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Flutterrape gives life meaning.

Wait a second... what season is this?

How the heck did she get kidnapped in the first place?

Why didn't she use the stare when she was free from the ropes and had eye contact on the two stallion's...

And these stallion's don't have the faintest a clue just who they have just abducted, do they?

Meanwhile the comment section has turned into a bloody massacre of likes/dislikes

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And then for others, downvoting it does!

Not bad. Though that part where Fluttershy narrows her eyes eyes make her sound tough. Have her quiver in fear their would be more in character.

You have inspired indirectly the creation of my current fic that's on-going. Kepp inspiring me and thank you.

can't wait to see where this goes, wonder what'll happen next

I'm not sure if this was intentional or not, but I'm getting a lot of My Little Slave vibes from this, which leads me to believe this was partly inspired by that. It's a very good story so far, not sure why its getting so much hate tbh.

Why would anyone ever upvote a story like this? This is absolutely appalling.

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Pornverse. Your logic is irrelevant. Fluttershy probably cannot use or doesnt have the stare. None of her friends, or their political connections matter for helping her escape.

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All around good advice. I’ll make edits later, when I’m more awake. Thanks!

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Rape fics get a lot of hate in general initially, but especially ones with..., interesting covers. As for the My Little Slave bit, coincidental. I’ve read bits if it, but never finished. Nothing against the fic mind you, I just never sat down to read it. The similarities are probably more just down to similar kinks between me and the author of that fic.

Great work so far, just finished the first chapter. I really like how you’re introducing ideas like Stockholm syndrome with fluttershy believing that if she cooperated she’ll be treated better, the part where she was thankful for small mercies but then realized she should still be upset is awesome.
Keep it up dude, reading the next chapter now.

And now we begin the training arch. It may take a few months, but by convincing them to give her food and doing her best to train, she'll eventually manage to pull an Iroh and bust her way out when the time is right. C'mon Flutters! Everyone's rootin' for ya.

Unless one of the typical and less fun, yet actually more accurate options occur. The Main Six burst through the basement door, or these bastards just kill her. One of the two. It sounds like they've done this before, so.

Elements of Harmony may be able to lead the rest to her...? Potentially. Depends on the author's take on them. Discord? Depends on the timeline.

This is interesting even though i have a small hate that it's fluttershy this is happening to but it's okay ill keep reading.