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Quite rushed the kiss, but I don't mind at all. Besides, the story's being great as far as I'm reading it; now, if you'll excuse me, I'll give it a like.
thank you for a very good chapter.
Not bad. However, two things. First, and this is a rule of extreme importance that should never be broken, whenever you write dialogue, any time the speaker changes you need to start a new paragraph.
For example, this:
should look like this:
Second,
The idea of parallel universes wouldn't really be a thing until the 60s. It's doubtful he would think this.
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Dude, thanks for the help! I probably never would have noticed that my paragraphs were wrong unless someone called it out (which you thankfully did).
The little fact about the alternate dimensions thing was interesting. This just goes to show that the 60's were truly WACK.
I will immediately move to fix my errors (when I have time)
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Technically, the theories existed, but outside the science community there were incredibly few people that knew it. The 50s and 60s, with the advent of the sci-fi genre into the mainstream, got normal people interested in things like that.