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It was about time Soarin got what he deserved, I hope that Celestia and Luna throw his ass in jail.
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Fuck jail thats a death sentence in most countries
I would have pluck your wings clean of feather and use them for my pillow!
More please
This is really good and I would love to see more of this.
Why did they wait a whole damn month to show the princesses the letter? That's not something you wait on...and why did Luna not question their reinforcements not showing up?
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Ok, I just took a look back at what you were mentioning, an I'm just going to come out and say that I thought it over and you seem to be absolutely correct. I was originally trying to convey that he was a CPT instead of a General, so that's on me for my god-awful wording.
I also appreciate you commenting and giving me a little bit of info on your experience helps me understand military structuring and how officers act in battles, so thank you for that.
I will try to correct these issues as soon as I can.
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Alright, so I'm going to explain this more in depth in the next chapter, but since you asked, I'll give a quick summery of why. Basically, the Equestrian military is completely disorganized and ill prepared for battle, that simple things like delivering a vital piece of information slips completely through the cracks.
Another explanation is that the Princesses priorities during the past month was to focus on civilian recovery, so they just immediately sent the army to help rebuild the city. Clear Sky simply never had the opportunity to deliver the letter, since she was either helping to rebuild the city, or she was watching over John. ( It's also noteworthy to mention that the previous chapter occurred after most of the major projects have slowed down.)
As for Luna never questioning the reinforcements, she never questioned it because, A. She was fighting alongside her sister in the battle and B. She kind of assumed that John had potentially dismissed them and Soarin had chosen to join them on this side of the castle (once again, the Equestrian military is pretty bad.)
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Thanks, I figured it may have had something to do with their inexperience and logistical problems, since they were desperately asking for his help. Reminds me of the AA, those guys can't even tie their boots right.
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"victory comes at a price" That is true for any victory, it matters not if it was perfect, or hard fought.
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