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well done to you on this excellent chapter.i will be following this story with great interest.
Hes a commander for the 1st infantry? As in hes a general? I think calling him the CO of an entire division is a bit of a stretch, those guys are never on the front line and most of the time nowadays not even in the same country their units are deployed to. Even during Ww2 those guys were rarely on the front.
Would have been better to have him be a senior Nco or lower commissioned. Never did like officers myself, most of them were holier than thou and could do no wrong. At least NCOs were in for a few years before being put in charge over anyone. I was in for 3 years before getting to E5.
MARE DOWN! MARE DOWN!
Uhh? Did you forget iron will is an actual character in the show and is a minotaur? I was confused when they were for some reason a pony. Maybe change his name to something like 'Steel Will' so people won't be confused