Cute and adorable.

Aahhh, I loved this!

> The splash was enormous, and she hit the sun-warmed seawater

> undoubtedly strange creature lounging on the deck, in the rain-water from the night before.

Uh… one of these thing is not like the other.

I just finished chapter 1 and I gotta say, for a first story here? This is fuckin' great, you made these characters really likeable without rushing into any of the hoof holding. Just letting them grow close, really like that. I seriously think you'd get big if you kept this quality and more no matter the stories you'd make.

11398995 It could have rained overnight, into the early hours of the morning, and then the clouds passed and the day started out sunny.

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It could be rainwater that started to accumulate over several days while he was out at sea. Or even before going out to catch fish

The first chapter of this story. For being your first on the site is superb quality and flows exceptionally smoothly. However. There is a section of the quoted sentence where I find it considerably unclear which one is speaking, highlighted in This colour:

“Handsome, and a sweet-talker.” She smirked. “I think maybe I caught the lucky catch. Y’know, my ma said that my second cousin twice removed had Siren in her bloodline. I just never believed her.”

Adorable and cute.

D'awww!

This was really, really good and wholesome <3 I thoroughly enjoyed it, great work!! 😁