Lyra had a decent life. It wasn't perfect but it was hers and it was good. Now all of that is gone and she's in the worst of all possible worlds.
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At least she was reunited with her lost son.
Great work still
Great, break Lyra. Poor settlement too.
Good job keeping the character development moving. You're handling the dystopia of the wasteland really well, the hard choices people have to make, and the way that Lyra is still struggling against it in spite of everything trying to crush her, and you do a good job with the ripple effect of it all. You do a really good job making Easy Money punchable, but you also understand where he's coming from. Continuing to really be drawn into this story, and Lyra's journey. I feel for her.
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Hmmm. I never meant Easy to be in ANY way sympathetic. Ah well.