Ooo I like.

Alright...... I'm eager to see where this goes in the long run.

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Thank you ^_^ Look forward to more soon

10140968
If you are a fan of Sly Cooper or noir spy and detective stories? you're gonna love this.

10140974
Here's hoping to see Rarity dressed a bit more like a thief down the road. Love her sexy-self and all but..... come on. She's gotta have a better outfit even IF it..... clashes. *Shivers in horror*

Makeup Codex?

10140975
Oh trust me she is gonna go through multiple costume changes through this story. Rainbow is usually the one who kinda dresses more like a stereotypical thief but of course Rarity is gonna get into a sexy cat suit at some point

10140978
BETTER HOPE SO! Also glad RD is the sensible dresser here. They're thieves not models!

10140977
Not exactly. More like a criminal code of conduct...similar to the thievius raccoonus from the first Sly Cooper game

10140983
Rouge is makeup.

10140981
Rarity is the field girl, Rainbow is the getaway driver and the muscle and Twilight is the planner and gadget maker. So things are gonna get crazier from here

10140985
I'm also expecting death and betrayal since you call this a Noir tale as well.

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rouge¹
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noun

1. a red powder or cream used as a cosmetic for coloring the cheeks or lips.

verb

1. color with rouge.
   "her brightly rouged cheeks"

10140989
I meant rogues in the context of criminals. Damn auto correct

10140986
Oh absolutely people will die and get betrayed here

10140991
But this is presented as a story of a mare gone Mary Kay. Not rogue.

10140994
It's more or less a revenge story to be honest

10140996
Revenge by Mary Kay and lead-based cosmetics.

Come for the thrills, enjoy the drama and the chills; as this is a story of a lady gone rouge.

10140998
like i said that was just a spelling error

Great chapter!

Who made the cover art?

Ok this looks like it will be fun

10141129
pic should take you to the DeviantArt page of the artist

10141132
Oh I am having fun with this one for sure.

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Thanks!

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You're welcome ^_^

Week of perfect weather and weekend of winter's return. But here is a new story. How uplifting.

Can't wait for more. To get to know better the characters, their pasts and relationships. And the world they're in. Exciting.

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Thank you for the praise ^_^

Hmm, this should be fun. I look forward to seeing where ya' take this one. So, are Rare and AJ are going to be field rivals, while Sunny and Twi are going to be playing that chess-master game behind the scenes?

Also, are Shinning and Twiggles related? I can't imagine Shinny will be pleased to learn his baby sister has gone in for a life of crime.

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All will be revealed in time ;D Lets just say this version of Twiggy is different from our usual version. But yes she is in fact related to Shining Armor and well there is an interesting twist involving Sunset I will reveal later but lets just say that things are gonna get oh so dramatic soon

Oh yeah, this is gonna be good.

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Stay tuned for more! Chapter 2 is already up