SciPieSet? Sure, sounds yummy!

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Figured I would try my hand at something new

Really good so far, I’ll follow it.
Unless Twilight’s secret is that she is a futa. If that’s your thing it’s fine, but it’s not my thing and I’ve had that happen in enough of these kinds of stories to be annoying to me. Still good so far.

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Lmao no Twi is not secretly a futa or anything don't worry lol

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That’s a relief. Thank you.

You know me so well, SciPieSet IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE SHIPS

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Glad to see my story has found you then. I should be able to update it again when the internet stops being dumb

I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this. This will be fun.

Although aren't there some other stories that might need some more chapters? I'm not trying to tell you what to do, far from it, but I'm only speaking from experience, if you have a bunch of stories out at once, it might be a bit difficult to balance Not trying to be rude. And if I come off as that, I am sorry, that's not how I wanted to sound

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I agree I think you should focus on one story at a time before going on a writing spree.

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Yeah, he has a lot of good stories, but not many finished. Shame actually.

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I plan to finish many of them I am just a very unorganized person especially having so many ideas and projects to work on entirely by myself. It's why ive been looking for an editor, co-writer and such to help me out so the load isn't so much

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What would be involved in these jobs if either of us were interested?

i'd be shocked if it didn't. but what about a 4 way with a certain siren?

I down to clown

Looking forward to more!

Inspired by the description

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It's gonna be a fun time for everyone involved

So, constructive grammatical criticism while trying to not be preachy: you use question marks too often when they should be commas.
Example:

Though fortunately for them both? A certain pink party girl changed that up real fast.

Sunset wasn't asking herself a question there, it's all one thought and should be one sentence. And I know why you're doing it. You're hearing the dialogue in your head and it goes up in pitch at those places, which people do when asking a question and therefore needs a question mark. But if that happens without a question being asked, it should be a comma to link the two parts.

I hope that didn't come off as condescending or anything, just trying to help you improve your writing skills.

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I just tend to miss things or put marks in places they shouldn't or I'll think something sounds like a question in mind but it doesn't translate that way onto the page. I mostly do that as a place marker so that i do not get lost where i am writing cause i tend to WICKED FAST and I am dyslexic so I cannot catch every single error.