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Holy.... that.. that is one hell of a plot twist i, i have no words. I mean i know it's a good story, one of the better ones in fact but i didn't expect THAT. I find myself awaiting the next chapter, can't wait to see how it will turn out
nice to know Chrysalis and Sombra know of each other, this could imply they were friends at some point or at least met before this.
Sombra turned himself female as he was having problems with his weird fetishes as Kris pointed out.
Also according to Kris, if your going to turn yourself into your rule 63 version might as well make yourself appear pretty.
No....no....No
This is the dumbest move you have done for this story. serious Sombra and not just Sombra but the female version. REALLY!? You jumped the shark with this move and I strognly suggest scrapping this chapter and do something better.
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Wait, you’re upset just because it’s Sombra? And even more so because he’s a she?
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YES! it's literally out of nowhere. Let it be a part of Starswirl left behind, he seems evil enough in this universe to do this.
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I understand your dislike. But my friend and I talked it over and we wanted a female villain with a reason to steal their magic. It was either Umbra, or Nightmare Moon. We respect you might not enjoy our choice in this, but please respect that we do this for fun, just as nearly every other author on this site does. It being liked or not was never our concern. Also, we don't spend days on each chapter. We write them up within a the span of two hours, sometimes a bit more, and decide if that's how it will go for said chapter. Again, we respect that you don't approve of our decision to use Umbra, but please do respect the fact that we make these chapters out of fun and enjoyment.
That said, the number of likes over dislikes kinda already rests the case.
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I'm honestly not sure if you're joking or not, but this is not Sombra who changed their gender on a whim, but was born female. Also, the idea of Chrysalis and Umbra knowing each other is based on an mlp comic where Chrysalis and Sombra have a meeting about a choice of the unicorn's. I can't remember the title, but look it up if you can.
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Yeah but still you got to take fan reaction into account. Some ideas may look good on paper but don't always work out. If there were hints before it would be less an issue.
Using one of my own stories for example. I had the main character kill Discord. I knew there might be some backlash for doing it. But i laid a foundation to lead to it. This came out of left field.
I want this story to be the best so please understand that any criticism is because I care enough to do so.
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I was joking btw.
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And thank you for that. But please, in the future, keep in mind that how you put said criticism might not be taken as constructive. How you put yours before had came off as you just not liking the idea and that was it. You merely stated that we screwed up and suggested we scrap and redo the chapter with no alternatives. Again, this is just how we saw it as it was written, not what you were trying to imply. As for no build up, the idea was for a sudden impact with no warning. After all, in the show, there was no build up whatsoever, as least to my knowledge anyway as I have only seen clips and heard second hand information, that Discord was acting as Grogar. This is sort of similar but for a different purpose.
Once more, I want to state that we do accept the criticism, but please word it a little better so we know more than just 'Why do this!? You screwed up, scrap the chapter!'.
Furthermore, there were few villains we could chose from given the time period and we wanted a female. Gusty wanted me to bring in A villain, not THE big bad villain, so this won't be the end, FAR FROM IT. I originally planned for Nightmare Moon, but scrapped that as we would have had to bring in the royal sisters as, let's be real here, there is NO WAY in Faust's beautiful world that they would have missed that alicorn returning, being they both were intimately familiar with her. As with Sombra, or in this case Umbra, I has not really been stated how well the sisters knew the tyrant aside from facing him and turning him to shadow and then the return before being blasted with the Crystal Heart.
That then left us with HOW Umbra would return. Before, Sombra was brought back thanks to Discord, posing as Grogar, restoring him with his magic. It wasn't stated exactly HOW Sombra came back again that time other than he and the others were summoned. So, while a little out there, we tried to give an explanation for how Umbra came back and this was the result.
Also, we already have plans for Starswirl, and NO! He's not the, to borrow gaming terms, 'final boss' of this story.
Now don't worry, when the REAL baddy is getting ready to make an entrance, we WILL have a bit of buildup for the suspense and let everyone guessing. I know we're already having people guessing what happened exactly and all that jazz.
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I was just really ticked off for it it feels like a clop event shoe horned in. while I don't mind clop I like a good story to go with it. And I did suggest some part of Starswirl taking the guys.
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By Gusty, he meant me. And I have to agree with how Nightshadow stated his response. We're doing this for fun. So while criticism is welcome that might help us improve as writers, the statement you gave before was more as what Nightshadow put it. You just didn't like the chapter.
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The comic in question is one of the volumes for Fiendship is Magic