[MATURE VERSION] Discord comes to Celestia, wanting her help to fix a problem. There is a Smooze in danger of attacking ponies! Celestia had no idea there was more than one Smooze.
Intriguing thus far. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this. The nature of the contest has me wondering what the natives will be. Or maybe this is more about Smoozes. We'll find out soon enough.
The nature of the contest has me wondering what the natives will be.
Discord referred to there being ponies that are potentially threatened, and it wasn't said if the island the Smooze is on is inhabited by any ponies. So, can confirm that the natives would be ponies and that the contest's prompt means the Smoozes will be the focus. (Is it just me or does the plural of Smooze sound like it would just be Smooze?)
10090187 The rest is in progress; I'm hoping to have the second chapter up in the mystical realm of "soonish". Thank you for reading what's here thus far, though. Incomplete gore stories aren't exactly attention grabbers.
The second I saw the name I knew it would be mature though not for the reason I thought
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It's a peculiar title for a reason. Though, it's not exactly going where you're probably(?) thinking.
Grammatically, shouldn’t the description read “there’s A Smooze attacking ponies?”
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I suppose so. It's changed now.
Intriguing thus far. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this. The nature of the contest has me wondering what the natives will be. Or maybe this is more about Smoozes. We'll find out soon enough.
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Discord referred to there being ponies that are potentially threatened, and it wasn't said if the island the Smooze is on is inhabited by any ponies. So, can confirm that the natives would be ponies and that the contest's prompt means the Smoozes will be the focus. (Is it just me or does the plural of Smooze sound like it would just be Smooze?)
Interesting setup, I look forward to seeing how it goes!
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The rest is in progress; I'm hoping to have the second chapter up in the mystical realm of "soonish". Thank you for reading what's here thus far, though. Incomplete gore stories aren't exactly attention grabbers.