An interesting twist. Not necessarily a bad one, especially since this seems like it will be brief, with a chance for some delightful feels at the end!
After this, armed with some new knowledge, hopefully there will be a round two! Maybe this time he'll get through all four, hmmm?
Also they probably could have shoved a hose up his arse if they needed him hydrated asap and couldn't get a tube down his throat. It's basically the opposite of how you absorb alchohol through your ass fast enough that it can easily kill you.
10243971 Yeah, even if you keep writing pornos for sex scenes you'll get massive points from me at least if you try experimenting with the emotional side of such a phenomenon as heat with the human-like nature of the ponies despite their equine roots. Real world equines are very social creatures anyway, with a large physicality to it, but the show goes beyond even that with how much physical contact is involved in their daily lives, whether hugging or otherwise. It's such a shame that something like heat for them isn't explored in a more human manner, given pony sapience. It always gets treated as something that hasn't evolved alongside the ponies themselves.
It all feels like such a wasted opportunity, one that I'd gladly try to fill myself if I could keep my thoughts straight for long enough to flesh something out. The curse of being a scatterbrain. Sorry for all but electing you my proxy in this endeavor.
In the amazing words of Doctor Lalves "Super Pro Spy"
"I have never been more HORNY."
Hey, potions have consequences. Nice! Love this story, keep it up! :D
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *rapid explosions*
An interesting twist. Not necessarily a bad one, especially since this seems like it will be brief, with a chance for some delightful feels at the end!
After this, armed with some new knowledge, hopefully there will be a round two! Maybe this time he'll get through all four, hmmm?
I think you accidentally put a exclamation point instead of a 'I' there.
Wow! Get well soon, Anon. You lucky SOB!
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Whoops! Thanks, fixed. Not sure how that happened.
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Thanks for the fun and encouraging comments, guys! I'm glad you're all enjoying my story.
I really hope this story will be completed. This story looks very interesting, so please don't give up on it!
This is a really good story so far. Can't wait for the rest. Good luck with your school work too.
What shitty potions.
Also they probably could have shoved a hose up his arse if they needed him hydrated asap and couldn't get a tube down his throat. It's basically the opposite of how you absorb alchohol through your ass fast enough that it can easily kill you.
This story is very good and I also have some ideas for how the story could go
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this is why minecraft potions are better
Well, sometimes you have to take the risk
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Short answer is that I just don't like Sky Stinger, lol.
well it seems worth it, there are about 1,000 ways to die far worst than this.
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Yeah, even if you keep writing pornos for sex scenes you'll get massive points from me at least if you try experimenting with the emotional side of such a phenomenon as heat with the human-like nature of the ponies despite their equine roots. Real world equines are very social creatures anyway, with a large physicality to it, but the show goes beyond even that with how much physical contact is involved in their daily lives, whether hugging or otherwise. It's such a shame that something like heat for them isn't explored in a more human manner, given pony sapience. It always gets treated as something that hasn't evolved alongside the ponies themselves.
It all feels like such a wasted opportunity, one that I'd gladly try to fill myself if I could keep my thoughts straight for long enough to flesh something out. The curse of being a scatterbrain. Sorry for all but electing you my proxy in this endeavor.
When is another chapter going to arrive
Oh I really hope you finish this good story! I want to know what happened to the hyoo-man!
Oooof, yeah I could definitely stand to see some more of this. Whenever you can manage it, of course!
Best of luck with your studies in these trying times!
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